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by Nymphidalia

person Lemonique
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I really DO NOT want Lydia with Makari.
person Lemonique
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that this chapter was focused on Lydia.
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a cliffie! very mean, more please!
person Lemonique
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was good. Makari needs to stick with his current mates. As long as he doesn't mate with Lydia, I'll be happy.
person Lemonique
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.
person Lemonique
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Makari already has enough mates, he doesn't need Lydia too. He should spend more time with the mates he already has and will have in the future and Lydia should go behind his back and mate with Lukas.
person kitkat
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dog Fight! Woo Hoo! Way to go! Just love the tension this story has got going. Can't wait to see who she ends up with. Fantastic wrighting.

person Caramel
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i like Lukas for her because Makari already has 4 other mates...sheesh does he need more? i don't think so! Well anyways, i love this story. Update soon!
person Lemonique
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I seriously hope that Lukas manages to mate with her before Makari does.
person Lemonique
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I hope she ends up with Lukas. They should sneak off to somewhere private and secluded so they can mate.