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for nightmare

by marylee

schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First I'd like to say thanks for reviewing my poem. I've never really thought that that poem could ever have the power to make someone cry. It just came into my head and I wrote it down. Nightmare made me really sad. My friend once told me something like that and she had to stop halfway through it because it was just so awful I felt like I was going to throw up. I hope you find someone like that girl, who you can hold, love, and just make you happy. Again, thanks for reviewing ^_^ You made my day.
person ree
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, first off that was deeply disturbing and made me want to vomit! secondly,(and don't take this personally)but you kinda made a lot of mistakes here and there, but other than that it was one hell of a story!
person Ray
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can belive just how powful the stuff you write is. I like it. Please write more. If you would like write me. masternetsurfer@yahoo.com
person Jas
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ever time I read stuff like this I start crying. I feel so mad that people will do things like this to other's! My best friend got rape before, only for me to found out that my cousin was and she soon killed herself . This happened like two weeks ago. I hate things. I just wish for things like this to stop.
person qutie1
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! THATS ALL I CAN REALY SAY AND THAT IT WAS SO DEPRESSING AND SAD.I ALMOST CRYED.