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Wow! I found this story tonight and have really enjoyed it thus far. Occasionally the change in POV's would get confusing, but nothing a quick reread wouldn't fix. I like how this is progressing. You're really a nice writer. I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)

Again, I'm late with the review. I had knee surgery and couldn't get to a computer, so I got to read chapters 4 and 5 together, which is good, because otherwise, I would have been worried about how badly Shidou had been hurt. Dang, it looks like Shidou can handle opening cans of whup-ass quite well(can you tell I'm from Texas?). How badly was that guy that he threw hurt? Serves him right if he can't walk, maybe it will give him time to evaluate the wisdom of living a life of hatred and violence. I'm glad Shidou's family is so nice and that they are helping Touru so much, though it looks like Touru has alot of very difficult problems to overcome yet. I'm glad they'll be there for him. I'm really enjoying your writting style with this story and hope you update soon!
p.s. I'm also reading Effigies and enjoy that story as well. Yusuke and Kurama and....Hiei too? Nice.

Aww, dude, this story is so sweet. Well, sweet and sad consdering what Touru has had to go through. The characters are just too adorable, the kind of guys you'd want to have as friends or something.

Please, do keep up the good work :)

I'm sorry it's taking me so long to review, I have troubles with writting. I've read the last chapter four times now. I think it's really great!! It is a most interesting way of advancing the story (it sort of made me feel like I was snooping in some one else's e-mail). Poor Touru and Shidou, to only be able to speak with each other through e-mail, yet their concern and care for each other is very aptly expressed and their relationship is deepened. WOW! You're a good writter! Please update soon!

Shidou is perfectly caring and sweet, despite his less than conventional living situation, and Touru, while he has more than a few problems of his own, is finally accepting what Shidou means to him. In short I love your characters, and I found the chapter of Emails highly original and particularly effective to pass the time until Wednesday. That last Email in particular made me smile. I cannot wait to see more of this. :)

Hey, good story. I'm kinda feeling addicted to it. Waiting almost patiently for your next update. ^_^

Hugs!

^_^! this is a really cool story i can't wait for you to upsdate =D!!

(ah, to lazy to log in.)

i like it and want more...please?

and i love the fact that your chapters are longer than some other peoples.

thanx, eiji.

YEA! An update! I really like this story! I really like Shidou and Touru too! I like that Shidou comes from a different family and hope they can help Touru, he's had a tough life. I hope those mean guys, that got away with hurting Touru so badly because of his awful family, do try to start something with Shidou so he can open a big ol' can of whup-ass and fix their stuffin'. I don't understand why you haven't got more reviews either. If people read reviews before reading the story, I have one thing to say: THIS IS A DANG GOOD STORY!! PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!!! Was that two things? I'm looking forward to the next update!

Hey, this is different! I really like it! I look foward to reading more, please update soon!