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Oooh, some very lush feminine description in this chapter. I think I've gotten far too used to everything being male.......or maybe that's just how I like it. ANYway, Tamara sounds like that rare desert flower, no? Beautiful to look at, grown in a harsh world, but possibly deadly to touch if you got on her bad side. Still, a lovely piece of work, indeed. And interesting to see that hint of a relationship that goes beyond apprenticeship between her and Sorrel, though, I'm wondering now what that sorceress is going to do to her. It makes me very curious indeed about what exactly a Kokkonor is. Apparently, Sorrel didn't want Victor knowing he was one? -quirks eyebrow-

Regardless, I don't think you have to worry about this chapter. At least in my mind, it didn't feel rushed at all. Quite a lovely job in fact, and I probably would have found myself drooling if females were more my thing. As it is, I simply enjoyed the chapter for its style and colorful description. I look forward to whatever you have next, and you're promising a smut scene soon? Yay! Even if it does mean you'll be gone for awhile... -sigh-

Good luck though. Happy writing, and I hope to see you again at least sometime not too drastically far off into the future. Until then, farewell for now!

-Moonstar

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XD Can't do the hetersexual thing? Actually...if it's necessary, I'd read it. I've read hetero stuff before and OH, you won't believe it...I've actually thought of writing it! Ha! Though, only as part of a mainly stash story...xP ANYway...onto the review part...about the most recent chapter! Wha!

North is cool! Very shmexy...and I absolutely loved your descriptions of him. His whole appearance really. In fact...I think I really loved that entire scene...against the wall with the cigarettes, their dialogue...everything. I think he's a cool addition to the club of characters you've got going here. But Capsian isn't interested in Victor? *pout* Well...maybe after the wolf...and possibly a few others...xD...have had their hands on him, yeah? When he's more...experienced...less of a virgin crisis? ^^ Nywah. Still...going back to the hetero part...if putting that in there means more guy/guy loving...then I'm looking forward to it!! I totally want to see the wolf...nyuahahahaha....rawr. xP xD

Also...TALFRYN!!! XDDD Ah....he made me laugh so many times...and I got such a pretty little picture in my head of him...with his pretty lacy shirt...high boots...AND CORSET! Ha! Well...i know the corset it probably under the shirt...but still...it's funny. XD So vain, so shmexy...(though I think wolf and Caspian still beat him dooowwwwnnnnn.....) Will Talfryn be important? o_O Come now...he's got me so curious...I wants more of 'im! -Ahem- Really though...I think this is one of my favorite chapters yet. Just loved the characters this chapter. So very real...and they make me happy and.......other things that start with 'h'. END!

*cough* Can't wait for the next update!! =^.^= Update, update, update.........chya!

-Moonstar

Aww...poor yous...no other reviewers? Well, it's certainly not because the story's worse...probably because it's a less populated section, ya. ^^ But still...cool chapter! I thought the way they were both edging Sorrel on was hilarious. And I'm glad to hear you won't be hurting Caspian! Or...at least not killing him off. T_T ^^; The way you described the sorceress's expressions was just priceless...and I love the thought of Victor all rugged and dirty. *evil laughter* xP ^^ Very shmexy.

The way Victor acts around Sorrel...I know she's beautiful (and I loved the way you described the color of her hair by the way, how it "...wasn't the grey of old age that he often saw on the slowly decaying mortals in the village, but the grey of a dove's wings, the grey of a majestic wolf's winter coat, of dark clouds that signaled an approaching storm." Very vivid.) But I keep thinking of her as his 'mother figure' or something of the like...and him being all kissy on her is like...o_O I guess I'll have to get used to it, though. ^^

And, omg, do I have to prepare for...dun-dun-dun-dun....H3T3RO$3XUAL $3X?? xP J/k. I know he's just biting her....but I wonder if it goes farther than that? Nyah. I suppose...until then! Sorry that it took me a while to review...I forgot about it...then remembered it...then got all excited as I read it...then didn't review *guilty*...but now I'm reviewing! Quite nice. And I look forward to the next bit! ^^

-Moonstar

I haven't been reviewing lately, I'm sorry. Yay for Caspian! I really like him and Victor... I just love vampires so there's too much to say about him... This woman that's waiting to be his coming of age meal thing sounds interesting. I can't wait to find out more! See you soon hopefully..

Michelle

Caspian!! I absolutely love him!! God he's so cute...and such a personality too...dangit...get rid of all his other partners, the whole future, everything...just let him be with Caspian! Pretty, pretty please? With cherries and ice cream and cake AND muffins? I loves him sooo much...T_T It's that lovely friendship relationship that I love almost as much as the enemy relationship. I havne't had a chance yet to have friends fall for each other but I do love it so much...it's just so sweet and perfect. Like one of my favorite sayings: "Love is friendship on fire." I totally believe that.

But...*sigh*...you won't let them be together. You'll turn Victor into a slutty dominant who goes around fucking everybody and in the end forgets all about poor Caspian...unless-....oh no...you had better not kill Caspian!! I know...I suppose I have the fear because...well...I've been known to kill off sweet, pretty, much-loved characters...but dont' do it! I beg of you! More cherries and ice cream...I'll cry if you do. T_T

Sorry. It's a long winded and lousily written review...but it just means that my thoughts are running into one another after reading your chapter. Which is a good thing. I liked it bunches. ^^ So yeah, good job, and uber glad to see more of this! Looking forward to your update...^^

-Moonstar

Wow. Victor sure has a reputation...what\'s he doing in the mortal realms? If he\'s so big and famous and powerful and perfect and all that...shouldn\'t he be back in the Fifth Realm...ruling it like a good little invincible vampire bishounen? Anyway, I still enjoyed it. I have to pity Lennora...the poor girl. It must have been a horrible life...created as an experiment, never fitting in anywhere, always being outshown and put aside, always a dissappointment...

I also loved your beginning descriptions of the realm itself, especially this one: \"...the near-dean and the fiercely alive...\" That seemed to fit vampires and lycanthropes so perfectly. Never heard of it put that way, but it really caught my attention. Appealing use of words.

Nice to hear that you\'ll be updating once a week, or at least trying to for awhile. Thank you for telling me...I didn\'t mean to, but I did forget. ^^; So yeah...lovely update, keep it up, and thanks for keeping me informed!

-Moonstar

Gah! I feel so guilty. I\'ve been wondering and wondering when you\'d post something...but I\'m so used to looking in the original \'fantasy\' section, I never even thought to check under \'vampires\'. I was just getting a bit anxious, looked up your name, and then noticed this at the top of the list with your stories! I appologize a thousand times over for not finding this sooner though, come to think of it, I never checked to see when you did post this...so my ranting panic may be totally out of place. ^^; Anyway, on with the review.

Lovely, as always, and it\'s nice, for a change, to see a bit of smut right from the beginning in a story that you don\'t plan to leave as a one-shot. I\'ve noticed that, at least with you, it\'s either a one-shot, or I have to wait till the END of the story to see much. This is a tasteful approach and I quite enjoyed it. From that previous glimpse of Blaine in \'Fate\' I wondered for a bit (upon hearing that he would, in fact, appear), if the intercourse would be as......heavily sadistic(?) as the picture I got from him before...(very uncomfortable and slutty sounding situation if I remember correctly), but I like the way you protrayed it this time. Rough, yes, but not overly done...actually showing a romantic connection between them, even if sex is a major part of the relationship. (Hopeless romantic here, I swear. Total sap when it comes down to it. xP)

Still, great first chapter, got me wanting for more. I\'ll have to remember to keep checking your name though, not forget that you post here. Just, for referance (hope you haven\'t mentioned this and I didn\'t notice, I didn\'t read your full author\'s note, anxious to read the story), how often do you plan on updating? Or do you even know? Wouldn\'t want to miss anything. ^^ So yeah, keep it up, and don\'t make me wait too long!

-Moonstar

Yay! Victor exists! Not to mention, you\'re writing when you said you wouldn\'t that\'s enough for celebration. I shall make a cake later just because of it... if I have time.