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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! :D I'm going to go read the Fate story, now. :3
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv story so far, let me know when you post these chaps next year. Keep up the good work.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kya! Total Love for this and previous chapters. The suspense is practically killing me with what a Kokkonor really is. I feel for Victor. Something tells me that source isn't going to be alive long enough to tell Victor what he wants... Oh, lovely F/F smut, by the way. Totally exotic to me, seeing as how I read yaoi more, but I loved it. Sorrel and Tamara are a scrumptious pairing.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I haven’t commented on anything of yours in forever it seems, and I apologize a thousand times over. I have, by no means, stopped reading. Things have just caught up with me, and I hope you can forgive me. I’ll try my best from now on to keep up with my reviewing. Promise. ^^
That behind me, there’s so much great to comment on now, I don’t know where to start. I suppose I’ll start where I left off (or where I think I left off), with my reviews. The North/Victor scene. Not only does it make sense logically (since I never did get to comment on it), but I think it was one of my favorite parts so far. (Ok, so I have a lot of favorite parts, but we’ll ignore that for the time being… Phht.)
As I’m sure I’ve mentioned numerous times before, North entices me to no end. No matter where you put him, what you do with him, or who you shove him in bed with, he is still the most undeniably sexy werewolf ever to roam the pages of fantasy literature. Awesome, awesome, awesome. Him and Caspian…I don’t think I’ll ever get enough of either.
You mentioned that you’ve never done a scene before where the two characters had nothing more real between them besides a friendship and a mutual desire for a having a good time, so I feel I should mention…I think you did a terrific job. North keeps up his teasing, Victor rightly defends himself, they both obviously want each other, and nothing goes much beyond that. Unlike some, I actually like the idea of two dominating personalities clashing. In this case, I think North was the clear victor (no pun intended), but I imagine Victor as he was at the very beginning of this story (with Blaine), or in “Fate”, and I wonder what a confrontation between the two men at that point would be like? I could see things going either way, and that sort of true competition could make things interesting. (Never gotten a chance to build up a story myself where two clear dominants actually fell for each other, but the subject interests me… I just have too much fun with pretty boys, I suppose.)
Anyway, moving on… Again, you make me worry for poor Lennora. I just have this gut feeling that something terrible’s going to happen to her sooner or later. She’s just too gullible and innocent, and I don’t care how nice Sorrel can seem to them at times, I swear that woman is EVIL. All caps for a reason. Pure and utter malevolence. –snarl- And I worry for Lorcan too. He’s too meek; too goodhearted. Something bad’s going to happen. T_T
Ah! But then we have…hotlesbiansex! -Ahem- Blargh. Do I have to be a perverted straight male to tell you pulled it off wonderfully? I hope not… Cause I liked it. If nothing else, I think I glimpsed, for the first time, a soft spot in EVIL. I think she really has some honest feelings for that girl. But maybe it’s just that pretty blonde hair driving the wicked woman sane. O_o Regardless, I couldn’t help but grin when she snapped at Talfryn for telling her to ‘keep a tighter leash on her human’.
Overall, very enjoyable. I look forward to the next chapter! ^^ (And I’ll be off to reply to “Pastimes” as soon as possible.)
-Moonstar
That behind me, there’s so much great to comment on now, I don’t know where to start. I suppose I’ll start where I left off (or where I think I left off), with my reviews. The North/Victor scene. Not only does it make sense logically (since I never did get to comment on it), but I think it was one of my favorite parts so far. (Ok, so I have a lot of favorite parts, but we’ll ignore that for the time being… Phht.)
As I’m sure I’ve mentioned numerous times before, North entices me to no end. No matter where you put him, what you do with him, or who you shove him in bed with, he is still the most undeniably sexy werewolf ever to roam the pages of fantasy literature. Awesome, awesome, awesome. Him and Caspian…I don’t think I’ll ever get enough of either.
You mentioned that you’ve never done a scene before where the two characters had nothing more real between them besides a friendship and a mutual desire for a having a good time, so I feel I should mention…I think you did a terrific job. North keeps up his teasing, Victor rightly defends himself, they both obviously want each other, and nothing goes much beyond that. Unlike some, I actually like the idea of two dominating personalities clashing. In this case, I think North was the clear victor (no pun intended), but I imagine Victor as he was at the very beginning of this story (with Blaine), or in “Fate”, and I wonder what a confrontation between the two men at that point would be like? I could see things going either way, and that sort of true competition could make things interesting. (Never gotten a chance to build up a story myself where two clear dominants actually fell for each other, but the subject interests me… I just have too much fun with pretty boys, I suppose.)
Anyway, moving on… Again, you make me worry for poor Lennora. I just have this gut feeling that something terrible’s going to happen to her sooner or later. She’s just too gullible and innocent, and I don’t care how nice Sorrel can seem to them at times, I swear that woman is EVIL. All caps for a reason. Pure and utter malevolence. –snarl- And I worry for Lorcan too. He’s too meek; too goodhearted. Something bad’s going to happen. T_T
Ah! But then we have…hotlesbiansex! -Ahem- Blargh. Do I have to be a perverted straight male to tell you pulled it off wonderfully? I hope not… Cause I liked it. If nothing else, I think I glimpsed, for the first time, a soft spot in EVIL. I think she really has some honest feelings for that girl. But maybe it’s just that pretty blonde hair driving the wicked woman sane. O_o Regardless, I couldn’t help but grin when she snapped at Talfryn for telling her to ‘keep a tighter leash on her human’.
Overall, very enjoyable. I look forward to the next chapter! ^^ (And I’ll be off to reply to “Pastimes” as soon as possible.)
-Moonstar
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I forget alot of important things! XD (this always seems to screw me over) Absolutely scrumpcious chapter, my dear, I have to say, North is quite the Alpha Male *wink*. And oooh? Is Sorrel jealous? *raises eyebrow* Hope everything is going good with your move to Vegas, by the way! Promise not to bet too much and sell your comp! *Cracks up* (Sadly, I've heard of someone doing that before) Can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Look it's me! Actually reveiwing agian! XD Sorry I've missed so many posts -_- I feel like such a mean person. I've read them all though ^^. You're doing a great job as always. Keep up the great work and good luck with your move!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey ^_^
i love caspian and North...i WANT THEM togther..^_^..that would be so cute!
great chapter....but when you called Tamara 'Mara' for a sec..it was kind of weird because thats MY name...^_^..well its my nickname (real name: maranatha...mara for short)...but yeah!!! i love that name Tamra...like Tamara Pierce...her books are great!
i love caspian and North...i WANT THEM togther..^_^..that would be so cute!
great chapter....but when you called Tamara 'Mara' for a sec..it was kind of weird because thats MY name...^_^..well its my nickname (real name: maranatha...mara for short)...but yeah!!! i love that name Tamra...like Tamara Pierce...her books are great!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! You absolutely cannot leave my like that! Not like that!! -fidgets in chair looking terribly uncomfortable- -growls- Now,now,now,now,now...post more now! -cry- Please? Ooooh, it was so pretty though! I like North more and more everytime I meet him. In fact...I think I'm falling in love. You need a story with North. Just North. North and his fantastic rough-and-tumble bad-ass bishi-ness to the extreme! -rolls on floor in fits of maniacal laughter- -gains control with slight cough- -Ahem- ANYway...rawr. I want to eat this chapter. Tis delicious. And I know the next chapter will be even better! Whahaha!
Oi, and I you speak of a Sorrel/Tamara lemon. -quirks eyebrow- I must admit, though I have occasionally prodded around in the subject, I don't believe I've even once read a very decent F/F smut scene. You, though, can write...so it could definitely prove to be an interesting experience. Still, I'm looking forward terribly much to the next chapter...this one was most certainly altogether too short. You hopeless tease! I'd punish you...but internet floggings just don't present the same results as real ones.....plus, you gave me a cookie. -stares at hungrily in avid fascination for a few moments, then gobbles- -dots lips nealty in British fashion after devouring the treat like a wild boar- You're forgiven...for now...but only because you must survive to produce the next lemon! Whahaha!
Ok, I'm done ranting now. Really. Loved the chapter. My heart goes out to you. Looking forward to more! ^^ Ah! And you're leaving me after the next chapter...T_T -sigh- Oh well...at least I'll be missed...and you'll be missed! Though I will get smut... -drools- -cough- -Ahem- ANYway...g'day to ya, mate! And happy hunting in the wilds of Africa.........or wherever the heck you'll be going when you leave me behind. -pout-
-Moonstar
Oi, and I you speak of a Sorrel/Tamara lemon. -quirks eyebrow- I must admit, though I have occasionally prodded around in the subject, I don't believe I've even once read a very decent F/F smut scene. You, though, can write...so it could definitely prove to be an interesting experience. Still, I'm looking forward terribly much to the next chapter...this one was most certainly altogether too short. You hopeless tease! I'd punish you...but internet floggings just don't present the same results as real ones.....plus, you gave me a cookie. -stares at hungrily in avid fascination for a few moments, then gobbles- -dots lips nealty in British fashion after devouring the treat like a wild boar- You're forgiven...for now...but only because you must survive to produce the next lemon! Whahaha!
Ok, I'm done ranting now. Really. Loved the chapter. My heart goes out to you. Looking forward to more! ^^ Ah! And you're leaving me after the next chapter...T_T -sigh- Oh well...at least I'll be missed...and you'll be missed! Though I will get smut... -drools- -cough- -Ahem- ANYway...g'day to ya, mate! And happy hunting in the wilds of Africa.........or wherever the heck you'll be going when you leave me behind. -pout-
-Moonstar
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh... nice one. XD always waiting for more :D keep up the good work!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD that was such a sexy chapter, het or no. And by the way, gotta love the side characters. I think Caspian needs more love, poor thing. (North and Cas have some ten--sion *wink*) Also, it'd be so hot if Tamara got some alone time with Sorrel. I like yaoi first and foremost, but yuri is refreshing now and again. I love your writing style, so decriptive and sensual, just draws me into your world like a deadly venus flytrap... Haha. I'd love to RP sometime on AIM if you have it, contact me if you'd like via mail or AIM. Great work, see ya around!