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by demoniceclipse

person dutsada
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! i was so happy you updated a new chtp and i read it immediately haha~~ i like this chpt very much.. its so cute and sweet... more yeah~

ps: Maybe i missed the hints, whats Mac's hair and eye colour?
person dutsada
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this.. I like where this is going~~~
person dutsada
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw thats so sweet of Tommy... and whoa! That two hit it of quick eh... i am now off to read you next chapter..
person dutsada
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tommy is so nice and thoughtful.. Mac is getting all emo already.. I love this! More please! How old are our beloved charaters?.. I sure hope that Tommy is the younger one... Its just weird to have Tommy older than Mac.. well from my opinion...
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please, please update soon!!!
person Drew85
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How old is mac and Tommy?
person Kiira
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading the first chapter some time ago, and I\'m very glad to see that you\'ve updated. Keep it coming, I need to read more of this :)
person Red hematite
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting begining. I loved the interaction between the two main characters. I wasn\'t expecting Mac to give in so quickly. Tommy seemed really adorable, I hope he isn\'t the killer, that would be such a shame! But he\'s too nice for that right? I love how you made them end up living together. Great start!
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story seems really intresting. I hope you update soon. I must know what happens!
person meow
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your original. I always enjoy stories of seduction and fun. Yum on both of your characters and here here to their 'getting together'