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for Can You See Me?

by TrueNosferatu

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schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Top notch, mate.
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's pretty decent. Go make more.
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing i like it :)
person Attika
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude,
I feel your pain. I know what it is like to not be able to have the one you want.
person jimmy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
girls are not just nice bodies. they have brains, too. perhaps if you tried thinking of your obsession as anything other than a piece of meat you might get somewhere in life and seem like less of a desperate jerk. harsh but true, ne? the poem's not that bad, otherwise.

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