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for My Untimely Death

by Chachi

person Enma
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I wonder if this type of thing goes through your head when I mention about you dying? It was a very sadist like story and I guess you already knew that I loved it right? But no matter what my dear friend if it came to that point where you were dying in front of my eyes and you asked me if it was okay to die, do you know what I would say? I would say something like "Though you're leaving me you stupid prick, our memories of being best friends and all of the good times will remain in my heart and in my mind,". Yeah sounds corny, sappy, and stupid right? At least I would like you to die with a smile. But I love you to death my friend, without you I would have probably would have never found true happiness, I think I might have starting crying for the wetness is running down my cheek right now. Yeah, I know you're reading this thinking "What the fuck? Why is she crying? Stupid bitch is a pussy, get over it,". But truly right now *shrugs* I guess I feel lonely, don't know why though. Maybe that '05 sucked ass (Its bad ass....hehehe)...anyways enough about my emotional break down. It was a really good short story, it touched me...really.

Forever I cherish you my dear friend (and even thoguh I have problems I need to work out and not write in reviews -_-)

Enma
person Trembles
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very dark, and pretty good, although i personally would have put it in the dark fic section. Ciao
person Shinda
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....o.0.... Uh must have been the most sadistic and insane stories that i have ever read from you....surprises me actually, the story reminds me of myself...not that i would kill my best friend...coughmaybecough. anyway cool oneshot. Your stories become more and more interesting.

Shinda