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by papirionara2006

person maccam
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, but r u going to finish it???
person Tasha
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, honestly, I didn't thik you were a pervert. True story or not, I really adore it. I will try to check for updates because I am extrmely ineterested. Wonderful read.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so when is he going to make his move? update soon!
person OMG
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope no one here is a stalker in real life so that they can tell you about their experiences and whether or not you are "doing it right". Beta is needed badly.
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the tips and reviews!
It is quite fun pretending to be a stalker, and I wonder if I am doing it right. lol

If anyone had a past experience of stalking some one, can you tell me if Mc-F is doing the right thing?
Does it feel that way? Well, I thought it will. I think I will be mad at some one for making me love them so much!
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool story! keep updating, i can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Naruto_2
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very depressing. I know how this guy feels.
it must be annoying to have some one stuck in your head all the time with out them even knowing that you exist!!
What happens to her? Or is he going to do anything?
person WHOA
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BETA NEEDED BADLY!
person Spellin
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Madly
Written

I couldn't get past your summary. Please read what you write out loud.
person Spellin...
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See how when you post without reading you miss things?

Like the spelling of spelling. Get it yet?