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for Broken Promises season 1

by mbearden2005

person kagome
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is that the end of the story? continue plz!!
person StoryJunkie
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, some beginning. Things really moved along quite swiftly, I thought, but I guess that you had already chatted alot
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it seemed pretty good until the part that went "We were in my room and we kissed some more until I took her shirt off and we had Sex."
it's so... abrupt... elaborate or something?