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This is a sad state of affairs. I can't believe the server crashed so hard like that. I have not reviews this yet but now I am. I am sorry you lost so many reviews. I do Hope people try and put some back for you.

Now for My Review: I Like this. It is very creative and the sequel is certainlu living up to it's first part. As for favorite characters? That is a hard question for I am torn between Serenity and Lucian. Silvan is a very honorable man. Veleska has her charms. Kristian Seems to be the clown. I feel sorry for Tamin because he lets Kristian get him into some of his womanly troubles.

The battle scenes are great. I love the detail you add to them. Keep it up! I await the next chapter eagerly. I also hope AFF has no more problems.

This is Really saddening me now. No one is even reading it. I am never going to get all my reviews back. I should just erase my stories and quit. It was my reviews that kept me even posting them here. Now no one is even bothering to read it.

*Sighs*

Starfyre

I love the way this whole sequal is going, I'm so happy with the new characters too, I can't wait for you to post up more!

I tried a few times last night to review and well yeah...hopefully this site wont go to hell again

as much as i don't like saying negative stuff (i can't write my way out of a wet paper bag so who am i to say) i have to say 2 things...1) Kaire's whining is getting redundant. I know that's her personality especially towards Serenity, but it's the same thing every chapter, just about. 2) i loved Serenity cause it flowed well and moved right along, but this story seems to be going very very slowly. I love long stories usually but this one seems to be dragging it's feet.

This thing went through and deleted chapters and reviews. I am not happy about it as I had 39 reviews up. If anyone remembers their reviews..please place them back up here? I would appreciate it.

Starfyre

I can't wait for the next chappie, ugh the waiting

She is far from Veleska. There are subtle differences actually. Veleska can not talk to the creatures of nature around her and the shi can. Veleska is only the avatar of a goddess. The shi gain their power from the forest around them. Veleska's is a power she can access anywhere. The shi must speak in whispers to people's minds, for their true voice is like a sirens to most ears. It is a very painful thing. The avatar can speak normally. Crystalis uses a staff and Veleska uses her hands. Even the avatar would be powerless against Crystalis in her forest. The differences are there..they just happen to both be bold and pronounced in the face of an enemy. More differences will be brought to light as the chapters unfold.

Crystalis is a literal world apart from The Avatar Veleska. Although the two may seem similar they are very different and their personalities would probably clash if they actually met one another, For each is a woman who commands respect and exhudes authority.

Starfyre

well i dont know about you folks but i this this one was great nice set of action of course those moorecats are ugly lol but good fighting and a hot cat chick what else do you need so i demand more shicat

Yay. I Love it!!

I think you did a great job a describing the fight! hehe I like the Shi. They sounded cool! Just be careful not to make Crystalis too much like Valeska okay? I hope you post soon!