rate_review Reviews

um this is a fantastic story and i'm only half way through but i noticed two spelling mistakes that i thought i should point out.
One: desert is the big sandy place and dessert is the sweet stuff
Two: secrete is actually spelled secret.

I don't mean to be mean or anything, I just thought you would like to know.

But this really is a great story and i am really enjoying the different dimensions to it. Keep up the good work.

Blessed Be,
Sandra

this is so good, I just finished reading it and I must say I am very impressed. I read the one prior to this one it was amazing as well. Your descriptions are amazing although you could work on your fight scenes, add a bit more action to it. If you want you can email and i will help you with the fight scenes...I love writing them! And if you want a beta I would be more than happy to help, you are doing a great job by yourself just little mistakes like secretes and desert and her self, just silly little grammar mistakes. Sorry I can't help myself, I'm a literature major at Melbourne University in Australia. Anyway, I hope you keep up the good work.
Cheers,
Sandra

sorry just went to see if you the review had been posted and saw that my "email is hidden" whatever that means, I must figure out how to change that on my profile....anyway....my email is killisandra_84@yahoo.com.au

I am more than willing to beta the story (just trying to be helpful to a fellow writer, please don't be angry with me for pointing out spelling mistakes... I really hope your're not) I hope this review finds you well.

Blessed Be,
Sandra

Hi Killsandra.

I tried e mailing you a couple of times. Your e mail address apparently didn't work. That or my Aol doesnt like the addy.

My E-mail is Dark1starr@Aol.com

maybe you will have better luck.

Oh and thank you for all of the reviews. I really so appreciate them. I am glad you enjoy my story. My plot bunny has been working over time with me to try and get everything hammered out for the last few big chapters.

Starfyre

Brillant! that was a great chapter

glad things are moving on now :)

Oh! OH! OH! OH! OH!!!!! I So did not see that one coming. You must hurry and update! I want to learn about Lucian too! come on! Why is he such a mystery still!


Serendipity

Bloody Brilliant. The Vatican? Oh I can't wait to see what comes next.


Butterz

Hugs N kisses!!!

That sucks! I remember mine mostly.

I said that I love your story and can't wait for you to post more on one. The second I said No hurting SILVAN! He is my future husband. Serenity just doesn't know that.

Another one is - I love Silvan to death but Lucian. Wow, he seems to be an up rising star in this. There is just something so otherworldly about him. Can I marry them both?

I think that is it but I will review again for you ~Big smile~ because I think it sucks majorly that you lost all your reviews like that. Hurry and get the lost chapters up for us!

That's just Kaire's Character.

The story will pick up. I just can't rush them past introducing Key elements. I'm sorry if it is letting you down. There are only a few more to go. I can say that the ending chapter is going to be a long one to write simply because of the difficulty involved.

again sorry if it's not moving fast enough. They will move along faster but I won't skip past the parts I feel this story needs.

Oh! Lucian all the way baby! Silvan is cool and all, he really is. Lucian though, Oh yeah. I know my men I like, cause I am all man, so Sorry Serendipity. Lucian shall be mine. You can still marry Silvan.

Serenity is okay too. I could handle her showing up at my bed side.



Cameron