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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
battle scene wasn't too shabby.
ever find a beta? my offer still stands to edit for grammar if you want until you find someone who can help with it and whatever else you said you were looking for.
ever find a beta? my offer still stands to edit for grammar if you want until you find someone who can help with it and whatever else you said you were looking for.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What are you doing!? You can't send Serenity in there alone! No! Get her out of there!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Lucian Eaten! Bad! Bad, bad BAD!! I told you he can not be hurt. None of them can. Especially not him. Oh and it was great too! But evil and great! you are so bad.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i agree i thought lucian would burst out of the thing aswell but still a all in all good battle scene although thats not to surpriseing considering the story tiself is wonderfully done so is anyone surprised her battlescenes are so good?
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! You had one of the Almighty's greatest warriors appear? COOLIES!!! Keep it up, I am loving it!!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I don't think you're slow at all!! But I am patient and I can't wait to read it!! So take your time!!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is so not fair. You have to update soon. Gah, what a cliffie. Can't wait for more.
Blessed Be,
Sandra
Blessed Be,
Sandra
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah!!! A Chimera huh? How cool! I love how you combined Greek Myths into this story. lol. I guess Lucian's secret is about to be revealed!!! lol.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!! Evil! Evil woman! Get back to your computer and write the next chapter now! No evil cliffs! They can not die by the way. No they can't. I absolutely forbid it. I won't let you.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA!!! The Vatican? That's genius man! Oh man! I can't wait to see this!