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OMG! OMG, OMG! OMG! *Is Panting* That was so cool! I could actually Picture Puck turning and tapping my computer screen! OMG! OMG! OMG! They need to turn this into a movie! I would so watch it over and over again! *Squeals* Thank you! Thank you! Thank you so much! AH! Ah! Ah! I am going back to Re-Read this. I am going to start at Serenity and read it all the way through! I love you so much! This is such a cool story!

WOWOWOWOWOW!!! I loved the ending and the story. And I loved the final battle! I wanted to cry too!! You are definantly one of my fav authors.

No! No, No, NO!! Get up there Lucian! Or Beelezubub! Kaire go too! Take Silvan with you!

Review- You are so Evil that I love the way your twisted brain thinks. Just STOP hurting my favorite characters already!

WELL WHO WOUDL HAVE GUESSED THE POPE IS evil lol somehow im no to surprised of course with a name like abisthine how can he not be evil and i have a feeling this battle is gonna be sweet people so stay tuned same evil pope time same evil pope channel

HAHAHAHAHA!!! That's bloody cool man!! You rock!!

Hey, beta from "My Trinity' popping in here. Just read the first chapter, and... well, definately going to have to read the rest. **nods** Sometime, though not sure when.

PS to Shorty450: boyz in eyeliner? Yes, we do look hot, do we not? Well, most of us, at least.

LoL. Sorry Every one. I know it came as a surprise when Lucian got swallowed. I am sure every one else expected him to rip out of there too Zodia but he couldn't. They planned for people of his sort by putting up all those special wards in side and out. So that is why he became Chimera Lunch! and later fried because kaire decided that Chimera needed cooked. See how much she loves Lucian?

The next chaper is on it's way. I just have a little more to wirte before it is finished. There isn't a battle scene but it does push the story ahead and explain yet more aspects to the complicated twists in the plot of this story.

Anyway! Hope every one is enjoying this so far. The big ending is near. Soon this story will see it's long awaited ending. oh and we can blame my plot bunny for it being slow. That bunny demanded certain things be explained and characterised more before pushin on with the plot further. I have a picky bunny. He is a goon one too. Maybe if I write another chapter to Serenity and Silvan's story after this one is over, it will still help me there too.

Starfyre

P/S: Please keep reading and Reviewing. I love getting the Reviews!

Looking cool so far! Kaire and Serenity are fighting. Lucian's insane. And Silvan is.....well....Silvan. And Lucian's a demon too?

As for minor typos:
17.)
“I know fait always has it’s own way of working.”


Silvan shifted his hips to buck them up into her and made her bounce now.

18.)
Lucian ran through (gets cut off)

20.)
Kaire in turn could see dis like and spite in Serenity’s eyes.

Neither man was sure if they had ever run across two women that dis likes each other this much.


“What do you man practically Prissy!”

I don’t think so! He is my husband and you have a very un healthy obsession with him.

He could see that it finally sunk into her that she was his and he showed her his affection bu holding her against him.

21.)
Wen they looked up they saw Kaire held up against Lucian.

They knew about about kaire now and the struggle in her mind.

Hey,
if you got email that's cool but just wanted to say that the last chapter was good. If you want help with the battle scenes I'd be willing to give you a few ideas although I think you're doing a brilliant job by yourself. i'm headed to bed as it is 10:30 at night in Melbourne on Monday and I'm knackered. Talk to you soon.
Cheers,
Sandra

Hahaha!! I love that battle scene. I will admit that I was expecting Lucian to burst that beast wide open. lol. Poor Kaire! Wow, but that was some battle! You did a great job describing it!