rate_review Reviews

I absolutely loved your story. I'm only sad that you made it a dream. You spolied it for me. Other than that, great job.

Looks like a nice ending. The part with the kids was a bit odd though lol. Sorry I couldn't review sooner, I had school and all.

I love the story, and I hope you keep writing more like it! You're great for plot driven and should stick to it so I have more stories to read at night!

..................... That was Cool! I say write another in the series.




Cameron

Whoa! Now that was unexpected. You do ROCK! <(^^<) <(^^)> (>^^)> (^^)


Hugs n Kisses!

Butterz!!!

Hey I am a Man in Black Eye liner too! I can't help if my mother named me Cameron. Oh and yeah That was cool. The pope? Hurry with the next chapters.


Cameron ( The Man )

You were probably just reading a review from Anon when you posted. I do that sometimes. lol its okay..a review is a review.

Starfyre

I am going to cry now. That was a sad ending! I wanted it to be real and not just just a dream. I still loved it. You caught me completely off guard with that ending. I love your little plot bunny. I don't care if it wakes people up at odd hours to complete the story.

I really did cry when I thought Lucian and Gabrielle were dead. You pulled that ending though! Ah! Oh my gods. I love this story. You need to publish it. I mean seriously publish it. At least make it into a book for your self to have around your house. Make an extra if you do. I'll buy it!

I love it. *Smiles * You have made my day.

Butterz!

Hugs n Kisses!

ok greatest story ever and anyone wana say anything else ill beat you and who saw that ending i personally didnt and loved it to death

Bravo! Huzzah. Creativity, romance, suspense, drama and characterization. My english Lit Professor is going to love this. I am going to show him this story. You don't mind if I use it as part of my senior thesis on creative writing do you? By the way, I think the others above me are right. You should take this to a publisher. They would be ignorant to say no to this piece. So once again, Huzzah and well done.


Prince Demitri Ivonavitch

Let your dreams guide you Starfyre. I hope to see more.