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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, cool story. i\'m a little confused as to what is going on, but i dont think i was reading close enough to find out. the characterization is diverse, which is always a good thing. and your writing is good, not any huge grammar errors or spelling errors or anything. im curious to know where it\'s going and am wondering if it is japanese influenced?
anyways, i really dont know what else to say but hope there will be a next chapter!
anyways, i really dont know what else to say but hope there will be a next chapter!