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I read this on LJ. Can't remember if I reveiwed it or not but it's really good! I shall continue to read more.

I think you made the right decision. I'd rather wait, and get an ending you feel really happy with, rather than get something you rushed through. Anyway, waiting just builds the anticipation.

Love,
Falcon

I love your story and I can't believe you ended with a cliff hanger. Well write more soon and post it.

You are talking about the finale of an really incredible story. Personally, I vote for taking your time until you are totally satisfied with it before posting. Creativity doesn't always follow deadlines. I also am hoping for a happy ending and a sequel! I love these two! They deserve to be happy! I reviewed your earlier chapters, and was sappily drooling over your work. So, if you need a good laugh, check back on what a rabid (or rabbit, in this case) fan has to say. I think I asked a few questions as well. Good luck on the ending.......

This is excellent! Very entertaining imagery and stunningly beautiful, intricate characters! Looking forward to more.

You didn't have to update your story just to stick in the review reply! ^_^; But I forgive you, of course. ^_~

oh no you can't stop there.please more

I can feel Ashi's pain regarding interviews for jobs. O_o... Every interview I go to they think I'm a guy because of my name (which could be good for a guy or a girl). But then I get there and they give me this look. >_>... At least I haven't punched or kicked any of them yet! ^_^ I love Garnen's question about who Ashi neutered. ^_^;

And yet another argument... Right on schedule! They can't go more than one chapter without screaming at each other it seems. And those screaming matches tend to get Ashi in trouble... And in this case, *deep* trouble. o_o... I have no clue how he might get out of this one. >_>... Perhaps a self-sacrifice by Lan? He seems like the type, actually. But who knows? Somehow Ashi will get out of this wuthout being hurt *too* severely... Riiiiiight? --glares--

Only one more chapter to go? Ooh! The climax of the story! Can't wait to read it! Please update soon!

On a side note... You forgot to reply to my last review! --sob-- J/k. ^_^; That's what I get for reviewing so soon after the story is posted.

Okay, you've officially got me scared. What's going to happen to poor Ashi?! I'm starting to really worry that you'll got through with your threats, and not give us a happy ending. I'll be keeping my fingers crossed untill your next update (I'd say I'll hold onto my lucky rabbit's foot, but that seems in bad taste.) Oh, really well written chapter, btw. Maybe one of the best yet. ^_^

Garnen, put down the coffee cup and go rescue the whore!!!! Ashi! Hold on lil bunny! Garnen will be there to save you! Right about........er, Garnen? *Winter looks at watch*. Yo, Garnen, get your ass over there and save that bunny!!!!