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Such a cute chapter! Your characters are really growing on me ... I can't wait to see where they all end up. Your writting is also getting better with each chapter (although I would suggest you use a spell checker in the future). Keep it up, I can't wait to see what your next update brings ^_^

Please dont stop there! I want more ,need more.Please it is a great story.Hope there is more soon.

Yay another two chaps since the last visit! So, the date and kiss were fun. I am a little confused, though, and think I missed the part where Garnen asked him what happened to have him showing up at the front door at such an early hour and then promptly passing out. *shrugs* Anyways, still enjoying. Also, if you plan anymore Spanish and you're not sure (something I totally understand), you might try www. freetranslations. com (of course remove the spaces after the periods - not sure if it would post the link). It's what I've used on some of my fics.

Oooh... Ashi was almost in some big trouble! (Twice if you count the fact that he almost got himself killed!) He thinks up some interesting, if not always sane, ways to get out of nasty situations. ^_^ And since I don't know any Spanish, I don't know if what you had in there was right or not. ^_^;

I wish I could wake up to chocolate! All I get are noisy parakeets, finches, and maybe a cat or three... ^^; It's cute how Garnen is trying his best to keep up his little "I'm straight and that's how it is" act. But we all know Ashi is slowly wearing him down. I think his little request at the end of the "date" will wear Garnen down even more. --giggles--

Please update soon!

I'm not looking forward to those two papers... One is for Asian American Authors and the other is for Asian Diaspora. I don't have anything due in my two favorite classes (Asian American Experience and Japanese 101). I'm majoring in Asian Studies if you couldn't tell. ^_^; I want to be a Japanese teacher when I get out.

Alrighty... now, I\'m not a native Spanish speaker, so this might be wrong, but there were two things I think could be improved...

Costar is a verb, so \'how much do -you- cost should be cuestas, not cuesta. And I think, but I\'m not sure, that it should be cuántos tú cuestas, not cuanto. And

>_< Bad internet.

And my only other thing was that Doscientos por hora would prolly work better Doscientos cada hora; each/per hour. Oh, and I loved the chapter. :3

SO sorry I haven't reviewed yet. I didn't realized that you'd stared writting this until yesterday. You know I love bunny bois, so I'm loving your main character. Can't wait to see what happens next. Although, shame on you for leaving it on such a cliffhanger ^_^

Oh, and thanks so much for reviewing all of my fics. Reviews like yours really keep me going!

Ah the plot thickens - friends betraying the poor rabbit and an evil menace on the horizon. I wonder how long Shi has been whoring to have been with literally thousands of men when he\'s only 22ish?

Wonderful update! I liked the fact that Ashi\'s refusal to hide what he is inspired Lan to take out his contact lenses, It shows that even though Ashi is a whore, he still has strength, and can serve as a good example. And I was really excited to learn more about the \"immortal ties\" -- I\'d been wondering about that for awhile, and you did a great job answering all my questions. What an interesting world you\'ve created! Also, I loved the shower scene. Such vivid, sensual, details. Very erotic. But now it looks like poor, sweet Lan has turned traitor! Ack! You have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

Love,
Falcon

I was gonna be lazy and leave without reviewing (again) but I figured, for a Thanksgiving present. :D I\'m really starting to enjoy this story; the characters are very realistic and likeable, and the writing style is very good and constantly getting better. And it makes me feel special, \'cause I can understand the spanish tidbits. ^^() Please update soon!