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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My e-mail changed and I have a line-art drawing for you to look at...(and I've lost your e-mail [bangs head on wall over POS PC] sorry!!!) Loves the mushy gooshy ending. :D nice story, very sweet.
Anyways, TTYL.
~daisy
Anyways, TTYL.
~daisy
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far...
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is something that I could read again and again, and never tire of.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story i want to read it again and again. thank you.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the last parts, and now I can\'t wait to see what you have in store in the next one...I\'m starting what you have posted already and I\'m awaiting everything to come!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story it has a good balance of happiness and sadness then happiness again lol with a good smattering of smut put into it i cant wait for the sequal and if your reading this then read the story you fools
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Now write more before I die.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, this is PJ Zatken ;-D I love the first chapter of this story. I like how you\'ve laid out your characters\' frame of mind, letting the readers know what to expect from them. The story\'s off to a great start....
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The second chapter made me cry...in a good way. Very touching and effective writing. Great characterization with the Mom.
BTW, I have to make a comment about the statement you made in the first chapter...about this site being a \"smut\" site. My comment is this -- it\'s smut if it\'s simply sex with no plot, and it\'s a wonderful story that just happens to have sex if it has the right components (good characterization, good grammar, great plot, etc.)...and there\'s absolutely nothing wrong with having sex in a story that addresses other matters of the human condition. In fact, it takes a lot of imagination and planning to create such a story and maintain it.
And your story\'s great. Please keep it up ;-D
PJ
BTW, I have to make a comment about the statement you made in the first chapter...about this site being a \"smut\" site. My comment is this -- it\'s smut if it\'s simply sex with no plot, and it\'s a wonderful story that just happens to have sex if it has the right components (good characterization, good grammar, great plot, etc.)...and there\'s absolutely nothing wrong with having sex in a story that addresses other matters of the human condition. In fact, it takes a lot of imagination and planning to create such a story and maintain it.
And your story\'s great. Please keep it up ;-D
PJ
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry, too ;-D It\'s kinda funny how we write stuff that reflects part of our lives and wishes.
In the original fic that NM and I are currently writing, there\'s big issues about parents. I feel sentimental over stories that addresses such matters and makes me cry...wishing that I had parents such as the one in the story OR how dare could a parent do such a thing to his/her child. I also like the child angle...ah, how you captured how teenagers think. What some parents consider as withdrawal from the child is actually a child\'s way of finding himself/herself.
Good job ;-D
In the original fic that NM and I are currently writing, there\'s big issues about parents. I feel sentimental over stories that addresses such matters and makes me cry...wishing that I had parents such as the one in the story OR how dare could a parent do such a thing to his/her child. I also like the child angle...ah, how you captured how teenagers think. What some parents consider as withdrawal from the child is actually a child\'s way of finding himself/herself.
Good job ;-D