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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, needs improvement, but it works for a beginner. Keep on writing!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story but i think maharette is to perfect i wish she had a flaw or two i think charcters with flaws are way more intresting then people who are just perfect. violet eyes come on.I\'m not flaming you i realy like your story but i wish the people were more realistic.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovin\' it. please continue
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I realy like your story. Hope you finish another chapter soon. I can\'t wait to continue reading.
Greetings and Salutations,
Angel
Greetings and Salutations,
Angel