rate_review Reviews

Hated the ending, what else is there to say. Hated it. I can only assume your A bad guy and want a chance to win.

So sad..

Argh..Ok it was a good story..I've read it so many times now i cant help but love it
it's not bad, it's just..tragic. Beyond tragic, the ending could have been just a little less "bad guys win, the end" and that would have at least made it a somewhat happy ending. When the bad guys took the castle, you couldnt have added that they intended to bury his body or make a memorial to it? Or that they felt somewhat remorseful or said that they would uphold his honor by telling the people how good of a king he was, even if they didnt mean it, instead of making it sound like "haha we killed the evil gay king! this will make the people happy!"
Poor Shandaar..damn this storys sad!! I wish he could have at least died with a smile on his face..panty j

SAAAADDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!

Fucking sad..sad story

I've never..ever..flamed a story..
And this isnt a flame but i gotta say..I understand why most stories have cliche happy endings now.
Because sad endings are SAD. ESPECIALLY this one, i couldnt stop reading this story once i started but when i got to the ending..i wished i hadn't read the last chapter. When someone reads a story, they get attached to the characters, so why would you write such a sad ending??
There wasnt even any sort of happiness or silver lining to the ending! Even in romeo and juliet the families saw it was their hatred that caused their deaths! So the story ends with the country being thrown into war, and the kings body being dumped somewhere..
I'm so sad..
It could have had such a better ending
anyway, i loved it up until that :(

Heres MY ending. Shandaar leaves the throne, then goes with the rest of his family and Kieran, the monarchy falls, leading way to a democracy which Shandaar's little girl grows up to lead once the public had calmed down. And while the children grow up to live happy lives, Shandaar and Kieran live HAPPILY EVER AFTER!! Exploring the world and loving each other while living in peace, like they always wanted.

I read the last chapter again..I dont think i'll ever forget it.

You suck, you are a evil twitsed son of a bitch. How dair you end the story like that you need to be taken and have your head examed because that was evil how you end that. You must of had a fucked up chiidhood enoder to have written a end that horred. After all those awfall things you put S&K through you still ended with the bad guys winnig, whats up with that. What was the whole point of them going through the hardships if you were planning on kill one them and never ended up together. Do me and the rest of the readers and never write another story again! Once again get help, you basterd.

BEAUTIFUL! A work of art, truly it is! ;)

~C~