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YAY! An update! You’re a great writer, manipulating the readers to cheer on a number of issues. Like, Link’s so heartbroken about Bliss, Bliss is in love with her “brother” who’s in love with his cousin (Rhapsody) and an incestuous concept in any other situation would be sinister but these ones are intriguing. Besides it’s fiction… get me? No? yeah?


LO! Finally an explanation on why Darrke is so uptight. It sucks that people who dare deviate from society’s “standards” they risk losing their job! There needs to be more tolerance, till’ then, I’ll say I have a hunch that Lilis is a lesbian.

Thanks for updating. Do continue.

Hahaha...Waza such an ass like his father but at least his honest about it. ^_^

I acutally feel sorry for Nakago-kun. I really do. *sniffles and near tears* *sigh* Ah well. Very good chapter and who would have thought about that? hm.... I was wondering why Mrs. Oshidori was calling Yuki that too. That answered my question. Anyways, I\'ll see ya soon Solly.
XoXo
Ara

Sweeeeeeetness. Anger flies. Hormones are biting people in the ass. HAHAHAHAHA! I love it.

Omg I love this story *hugs Solly* Thank you so much for making these wonderfully addictive stories!

i want to know what this Shu, Sora, Harmony, Rhapsody thing\'ll become. it\'s so twisted and they have so much untold background!

i don\'t understand why Yuna is still with Waza. dude is very blunt and IS his father\'s son (what did that man teach him b4 he spilt?), and it\'s clear Yuna\'s being used and not getting any gain or satisfaction in that relationship!

i had to change some things in the Family Tree (R.I.P. Shinji!). so it\'s revised and i\'ll e-mail to ya, yet i take it that\'s not going to be the last time it has to be revised! i feel for Nakago (blah, i guess Kaori too). I wasn’t too surprised at what happened to them, the enigma that is the Oshidori parents had to have something shady to have such messed up kids. I can’t tell if you had Nakago tell this story all along or conjured it recently, either way, it works.


Awe-inspiring, Solly!

.. I forgot that one little detail. Thanks Tiera for like saying that! Makes a whole lotta sense now. ^^

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Finally one of the parents snapped. I was waiting for it. ^^ Good job. And how are Ashe and Harmony related again? They have different last names!

Ara\'s question brought me to ask (and this will answer her question): Shai and Fuji are half sisters, so why does Shu talk about NOT being related to Rhapsody when he IS? all the Memeshii and Inperiau children are blood related somehow, except for Bliss, who\'s related to the Kisekis... and don\'t get me started on Waza! hope i didn\'t confuse neone!

sex, lies, guilt/remorse, deceit.... teen angst at it\'s finest! the depiction of the \'I Never\' game was very juicy and i didn\'t even get confused with the names! the bad part is... there was no climax and the kids, and me, are left with inquiries of what just happened! good thing there\'s more.

wonderful job you\'re doing, Solly!