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by othello

person M&M
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not great with ideas, but I love your first two chapters & can't help but wonder if the female character will give in so easily. I hope you'll overcome your writer's block soon because I would love to read your next chapters. Please update soon!
person Allyburg
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and get unblocked
person M&M
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Cant wait to read more of your material. Great plot by the way! Please update soon.
person DerMetzgermeister
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh its good! The first chapter is so sad, especially the end! Yeah, but Im a sentimental fool. Keep writing and post the second chapter soon or Ill come after you. I know where you live. I never thought Id see the day wed both be posting here. Go figure. ^_- Love you, keep up the good work!

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