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for The Ring

by Aten

person Shadi88
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad but in my opinion you could do better its very good but at the end it needs work you should really keep going I will look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Butterfly Beauty
person bakurasgirl
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Today....November 6, 2005.....I cast my wedding Ring and pendant into the Delaware River.

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