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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww this was a good chapter. and more insight on Kyoei\'s life yay! so he has rural parents, is a techie; and the worst of all news he has a sick dad and going away for some weeks. only can wait to see how Shai\'ll take his absense.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
glad to see the new series up =] keep up the good work and don\'t forget to UPDATE! >]
your devoted fan,
Yumi =]
your devoted fan,
Yumi =]
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay... Really anxious to see what becomes of them, especially Yuki. YUKI all the way! I guess I like her the most because although she may not be the smartest out of the bunch, she\'s smart enough to not put herself in stupid predicaments. Well maybe Kago, but atleast she walked out.
For some reason, I really can\'t stand Fuji\'s character. Call me a hater but no matter what she does, I really can\'t stand her. I find it really funny that she claims to love Amatsu but won\'t have sex with him but will open her legs on a whim for Develin? Even though Amatsu did break up with her, she... I dunno... I\'m lacking too much sleep right now to put into words.
Thanks for posting.
For some reason, I really can\'t stand Fuji\'s character. Call me a hater but no matter what she does, I really can\'t stand her. I find it really funny that she claims to love Amatsu but won\'t have sex with him but will open her legs on a whim for Develin? Even though Amatsu did break up with her, she... I dunno... I\'m lacking too much sleep right now to put into words.
Thanks for posting.
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow 2 in one night! like you Solly, Amatsu\'s stepping up his game, and messing with Fuji\'s head now, i see. i\'m all for it, do the damn thang. a love triangle forming? hmmm.....
Danko\'s feeling cheated. i still love her deeply, she\'s getting the short stick in life, man. Kaori should take her and her inbred baby back to Canada! she only reminds the group of the bad times in the past. what good is she?
Danko\'s feeling cheated. i still love her deeply, she\'s getting the short stick in life, man. Kaori should take her and her inbred baby back to Canada! she only reminds the group of the bad times in the past. what good is she?
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!! Glad to hear that all the craziness has settled and that things are getting better. Love your writing as always and cant wait for the drama to begin! =)
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SOLLY\'S BACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! *huggles you* T__T You are like so awesomeness and I\'ve missed you! Yay! Now part three is up! Huzzah! Cheers and rose petals! *tosses them around with claps going around* ^_^ Keep it up girly! I luv ya and all of your stories! I\'m jealousssssss... >.< haha.
-Ara
-Ara
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO Ch. 2 was beautifully written! sucks the girls are moving apart, yet that could be a good thing. how ironic - which i think is on purpose - Diotrephes (how do you pronouce that?) has light purple eyes, white (like snow) hair and gives girls \"chills\" and his name\'s Frost. YAY! we know who the guy is now... and how does he know Kaori...? and why the hell was Shinwa huggin that Ashtray?! *gets out knife and threatens to slice the bitch* all will come to light in the succeeding chapters, i\'m sure...
lovin\' it, Solly!
lovin\' it, Solly!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lolz.. I\'m sorry but there is not one thing about Fuji that I like. It\'s like the more I read about her, the more I can\'t stand. I guess you developed her character well enough to get under my skin.
And Kaori?!?! She dodged a flying bullet didn\'t she?
Yuki all the way!! =)
And Kaori?!?! She dodged a flying bullet didn\'t she?
Yuki all the way!! =)
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s baaaaaaacccccckkkk!!!!
how loyal are you, Solly. to continue this story after turmoil, this only proves you are a gifted writer... writers can\'t stop writing. some people (like me) start and never finish what they began, leaving the audiance left hanging and bummed and unknowing of an end, when the author prolly didn\'t know an elaborate end themselves! not you tho, you go on hiatis but you keep your word. and though your losses were, i take it, very hard to move along, you\'re back with the last installment. and i got faith, you\'re a great writer so you\'ll have no problem finishing (almost hurts to know Year 3 is the last) what you started. you will recapture the story and it\'ll just flow like it always did before... like i said you\'re a gifted writer, babe!
but i gotta tell ya:
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{{“My mom has no faith in me,” Fuji had sighed, and then hopped in the truck that Kyoei was driving all of the way to Tokyo.}} She had told her friends that she would allow them to spend the night, as long as they behaved.
*that truck thing made no sense since Fuji was on the stairs in the beginning then she was in a truck? whhhaaaaa ya did say you couldn\'t concentrate on it much.
Yuki said nothing, she just watched as Devilin suddenly grasped {{Yuki’s}} hand and pulled her into the backroom, his subtlety at wanting to be with her alone nonexistent.
*Fuji\'s hand
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smh @ Devin... all he wants is the goodies.
poor Yuki, i miss Shinwa too. *tear*
-always,
Tiera.
how loyal are you, Solly. to continue this story after turmoil, this only proves you are a gifted writer... writers can\'t stop writing. some people (like me) start and never finish what they began, leaving the audiance left hanging and bummed and unknowing of an end, when the author prolly didn\'t know an elaborate end themselves! not you tho, you go on hiatis but you keep your word. and though your losses were, i take it, very hard to move along, you\'re back with the last installment. and i got faith, you\'re a great writer so you\'ll have no problem finishing (almost hurts to know Year 3 is the last) what you started. you will recapture the story and it\'ll just flow like it always did before... like i said you\'re a gifted writer, babe!
but i gotta tell ya:
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{{“My mom has no faith in me,” Fuji had sighed, and then hopped in the truck that Kyoei was driving all of the way to Tokyo.}} She had told her friends that she would allow them to spend the night, as long as they behaved.
*that truck thing made no sense since Fuji was on the stairs in the beginning then she was in a truck? whhhaaaaa ya did say you couldn\'t concentrate on it much.
Yuki said nothing, she just watched as Devilin suddenly grasped {{Yuki’s}} hand and pulled her into the backroom, his subtlety at wanting to be with her alone nonexistent.
*Fuji\'s hand
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smh @ Devin... all he wants is the goodies.
poor Yuki, i miss Shinwa too. *tear*
-always,
Tiera.