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for School Girls' Stories - Year 3

by SolaceFaerie

person Ara
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <-- facial expression from the last paragraph or so.

Oh. My. God. Amatsu. Oh. My. God. Fuji.

Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. GO SOLLY! KEEP IT UP!!! ^_^
-Ara
person Ara
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Solly darlin, you just don\'t know how much I love ya right now. That is SO awesome... I LOVE the twists in this story, and this is the last part?!!! Ohhh gosh... can you do like a story with all the girls individual though?! Geeze!! T___T I cannot believe this is the last parttttt. *cry*

<33 xoxo
-Ara
person Tiera
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whines* Soollllyyyy... you can\'t just LEAVE it like that! you got to continue, make it 5 chapters today. :)
person Tiera
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK i hope Kaori pulls through, but with he twists you\'ve had b4, Solly, ya never know. Shai has gotten very mature and wise, and is the right person to care for Bliss, she\'ll be more of a motherfigure than Kaori would (even to her own seed).

eh, will Nakago ever see his baby?
person sheerpink
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im still suspicious as to whether or not bliss is really the child of kaori and nakago because they both have gray eyes and bliss has blue eyes, right? anyway, update soon!
person Ara
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kaori had Bliss and now she\'s dying.

Heh. Exactly what she gets.

Sorry, I know you love all your characters dearly, but I despise Kaori now. *tsk* Shame on her. Stupidity.

Shai is so grown now! How cute! ^_^ She reminds me of my friend Ame in this chapter, winning arguments like that. Hehehe!

Yuki-chan! ^___^ I love Yuki in this chapter. Reminds me of myself: saying the truth in a playful way?.. I dunno. Haha.

<33 Many hearts, hugs and kisses from Ara! (Basically saying keep up the good work!)
person LKN
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuki\'s so sweet. I just love her character. Why do I have this lingering suspicion that Shinwa\'s gonna cheat on her or hurt her? Hope he doesn\'t though.
person Angel
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... that\'s all I\'ve gotta say
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“I think Kaori probably made the right choice asking you.”

i agree!

if giving Bliss (the baby) to Shai and her family means a better life for her then i\'m all for it. and i really wanna know how this child\'ll turn out with such close genes, to put it bluntly, spawned from a slut and a fugitive.
person Angel
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I miss Shinwa!! He was so sweet! And I\'m glad Fuji\'s finally getting a taste of her own medicine lol Maybe that\'ll stop her from being TOO much like her mother ha