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for School Girls' Stories - Year 3

by SolaceFaerie

person Angel
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuki =( However I would like to know Shinwa\'s side of the story....
person Ara
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Solly, dear, Frost sounds very familar with the eyes. Gah. I can\'t point it out! Nice so far. The whole thing with Fuji, Devilin, and Amatsu was awesome. Totally unexpected. Poor Yuki. All alone. I kinda feel sorry for Kaori\'s husband. *tsk* ah well, that\'s the way the cookie crumbles.
Well talk to you soon.

xoxo - Ara
person LoganJennings
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Frost is Shinwa isn\'t he.....*glare*
person LoganJennings
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I\'m right E-mail me :)
person Twisted Rose
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that little flash back was so cute. And Shinwa wasn\'t really with that slut, was he? Poor Yuki can never find a man that\'s true, maybe Frost will be the one that really saves her in the end ~.^ KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!
person LKN
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!! You can\'t stop there! What the hell has he been doing in London?? Actually, WHO was he doing in London? I find it highly doubtful that as busy as he is, he couldn\'t find 5 minutes here or there to call her!! He could\'ve even multi-tasked and called her while he was taking a shit or something and I\'m sure she would\'ve been happy! Now I\'m all edgy. More Yuki!
person TT
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a day. Amatsu and Devilin are getting along, sorta, the *fiance* rivalry makes their tug-of-Fuji interesting.... yet at the same time it is still odd!

Yuki\'s all by herself but she\'s a trooper, i strongly believe now that she\'s not occupied with other people new and fortunate developments will occur.... i have various predicaments in mind.
person Ara
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Solly! Keep it up!! ^__^ I love ya so muchhhhhhhh!
person Angel
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:( Growing up such a difficult thing to accept sometimes
person TT
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! so that\'s who Frost is? an old friend of the Oshidoris\', eh? being a former friend of Nakago\'s, i\'m sure glad he seemed to turn our nice (and beautiful). and the being albino part would explain the pale skin, white hair, and lavender eyes. *taps chin* pretty witty, smart of you Solly... albino was never a thought in my mind!.... but his identity reveal only lead to further questions... specifically the ones Yuki had asked after her head clicked!

*phew* i thought Shai was gonna get the boot. i would have never stood up the way she did, ultimately getting Kyoei\'s father stamp of approval. wise old dude, he must be.