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for Heaven's Secret Sin

by TopHatValin

person smint45
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is absoloutly fantastic I totally love it!!!!! And I'm soooo sad that you don't continue this!!!! I so want to know if Michael is one of his Angels and what will happen!!! Will he remember that he is god?? Will the search for the other angels? Will the deamons atac them?? Awe I want more!!!!! If you ever decide to update this story again please send me and email to kuraitenschi@web.de !!! Thanks a lot!!!!
person peeps
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Please continue
person heela
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like best effin story ever!!
person boring_neko19
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOUr story make me spinning. Switching between diary and real word like that sometime make me confuse cause I Never read any story like that. Anyway, It's great. Just keep write from your heart, as you want, and in a way that just you know. I like it. Good luck
person bambi4real
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. it sounds pretty complex and deep. please keep up the good work. you've got me on the edge of my seat.
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update. i read this back in '05.waitin for that 3rd chpt.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story please update soon=)
person Mila
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You can\'t imagine how much I loved this!! plz continue! plz plz plz!!!! Can\'t wait for the next chap!
^^
person Hana1997
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. I would very much like to read more of this; it\'s just getting interesting.. :)
person sarah jo
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GOD! talk about a cliff-hanger. That has got to be one of the best cliffhangers that Iv ever read! Im guessing Mikael is the guy with the red eyes, but how did he know about even? And how much does the friends. I really hope you dont take too long in updating for this is on of the most interesting and creative ideas that Iv seen in a while. as for the title, in order too offer any type of help it might help too know more about the plot or the main people. Im not much help right now any ways for the title \"Red Eye\" keeps coming into mind (for I recently just watched the movie) but since that is not much good and taken, Ill keep brainstorming.
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