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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey that was amazing i thin the relatonship you have developed between this 2 characters is incredible and that territoria way he acts is really cool please update soon
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love ur sotry
whoever told u the story sucked, it doesn\'t!!!!!!!!!!!
i think thatit is a great story and you should keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thnks so much
whoever told u the story sucked, it doesn\'t!!!!!!!!!!!
i think thatit is a great story and you should keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thnks so much
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your plot is interesting and so are your characters. I find that you move too quickly, try slowing down and providing some more description. It would also be easier to read if you do a bit more copy-editing: not just spelling, but also fixing minor inconsistancies.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...very different from what i thought it would be like...but not bad...the story is moving kind of fast- but then again- the whole werewolf thing- that might be what you were going for....i think i like it..not really sure yet...i\'d love to read the love scene though- lol...keep writing- i\'d love to see where you go with this...
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i want to know what happens next! damit
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I had just typed a bloody review then lost it, so here goes again!
I started reading this piece and nearly stopped because it seemed so hurried, but I persisted and I am glad I did, it\'s turn into quite and entertaining story. I see you had a plan for your story from the start, you were just a little impatient with the begining. Now that you have hit your stride and the story is moving in the direction you wanted it\'s good!
Now, seeing as I have reviewed, will you please continue???
I started reading this piece and nearly stopped because it seemed so hurried, but I persisted and I am glad I did, it\'s turn into quite and entertaining story. I see you had a plan for your story from the start, you were just a little impatient with the begining. Now that you have hit your stride and the story is moving in the direction you wanted it\'s good!
Now, seeing as I have reviewed, will you please continue???
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this. Please can you update soon. I can\'t wait for them to smuther their scents all over each other.
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I RETURN.....
Me, The Prince, has found out that you have not responded to my call??? I still wait for you, my Lupine_Lover!
do do do do, do do do, do do do do, do, dododododo
The Prince: {On Phone} Yes baby, you make me hot too......O!
::cough cough:: So Lupin_Lover? what do you say to having a Prince of your own, to read long Hot Steamy Sex Stories!!!
Far Thy Well, Far Madam...
Sign....
The Prince*
.aka. ChibiVegetaNeko
@;----
Me, The Prince, has found out that you have not responded to my call??? I still wait for you, my Lupine_Lover!
do do do do, do do do, do do do do, do, dododododo
The Prince: {On Phone} Yes baby, you make me hot too......O!
::cough cough:: So Lupin_Lover? what do you say to having a Prince of your own, to read long Hot Steamy Sex Stories!!!
Far Thy Well, Far Madam...
Sign....
The Prince*
.aka. ChibiVegetaNeko
@;----
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O YES.....I have read your work before, and it has improved wonderfully......::sigh:: Now, what charming worlds can The Prince give to you?
The Prince: O how sweet your smell...
Lupine_Lover:......
The Prince: Speechless i see....That is how i like them....Well? in some cases, screaming with pleasure ::cough cough::
::Ring Ring::
The Prince: Well, i must go, another young pure beauty is calling me......
*The Prince*
.aka. ChibiVegetaNeko
@;----
The Prince: O how sweet your smell...
Lupine_Lover:......
The Prince: Speechless i see....That is how i like them....Well? in some cases, screaming with pleasure ::cough cough::
::Ring Ring::
The Prince: Well, i must go, another young pure beauty is calling me......
*The Prince*
.aka. ChibiVegetaNeko
@;----