rate_review Reviews

Woah. This is really good. You have some good descriptions and the pain and suffering that Jessica is going
through is very well described.

I really enjoyed this story and I hope it gets continued soon.

This is a very good plot and you have good sentence structure, but you don\'t seem to use grammar a lot. Just a minor thing I noticed. One thing that bothered me was the fact that you always put brothers instead of brother\'s. Oppostrafy s if it belongs to someone (this included stares). Other than that, this is very good. Please relealize, this is just constructive criticisim. I think you have a really good idea here and should keep it up.