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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It has been a while since I've seen a story that I'm so desparate to have continued. Your writing engages the reader from the get-go so now I'm dying to find out why she didn't get rid of the husband and how he became the husband in the first place.
Excellent start and I look forward to updates.
Excellent start and I look forward to updates.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey D i love this story it\'s so good!! you should write more i would definatly read it!
see ya later
keep up the good work!!
I love it!
see ya later
keep up the good work!!
I love it!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where\'s the rest of it?
It\'s a good idea but you need to elaborate more. There is absolutely no story here. Just an idea. Add in some detail and have more than a three paragraph intro.
Hippie
It\'s a good idea but you need to elaborate more. There is absolutely no story here. Just an idea. Add in some detail and have more than a three paragraph intro.
Hippie
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You get a lot of insight into the characters.
Hippie
Hippie
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooOOoo i like the idea behind this one. I should prolly work on mine a little what do you think? Anyway this is a really good start and i can\'t wait for more. :)