rate_review Reviews

This is a great story. Kinda weird...but good!

This is really cool so far ^.^ I\'m really enjoying it. Poor thing, but of course, it\'s through her torture we find our sick pleasure so you must write more so we can see more icky but lovely torture. lol

Sweet Mother Night!!! What an AMAZING story! I LOVE it! Keep up the Amazing work there dearest!
Bites\'n\'Nibbles

lovely story. had some similar fantasies myself in my troublesome youth.
so...does Hell have a brother? is he single? can i meet him?
i miss my own demon, IT left you see and now i\'m lonely.
i envy you Desdemona.
back to reality, i loved, absolutly loved the story. did you consider being published, for real, like in a book? you would do vrey good. if you ever writte a sequel to this Send it my way first .lol.
oh, and just in case i don\'t get to say this some other time, good job in blending all that analy retentive christian bull*#%t about hell and pain away from God. loved it!

Omg. I love it. Please continue!

The house of Hell... its the house of his name and quite litterally, the house of Hell, entirely! Lol. Lovely title.

I must say (besides the tiny misprinted boxes at the very bottom) that this is, by far, the BEST written piece of work you have ever posted that I have ever read!

Well, you have a lot of errors in here dealing with the website. You need to repost this second chapter; take a look at it! But hey, as before, the writing is spectacular. I await for more.

I thought the story was very well written, almost verse. I can also say it scared the hell out of me. That is one creepy nasty scene that you paint. Nice work.