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for Killing You Softly

by RedFox

person Cindyip
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, it\'s quite dark. Please update soon;)
person Chrysler
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is heart wrenching but i like the slow, steady pace ur taking. It\'s not rushed and it\'s very conflicted and i love it. Please inform me when u update please?
person Kira
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I like this. :)
person cc
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story -- more soon
person Jenn
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww I\'m gonna cry :\'( Hope you update soon.
person DrkDreamer
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chapter 1...

It kinda conflicts with my \'idealistic\' idea that we are all responsible for ourselves and shouldn\'t blame other people for our fuck-ups - but you sure build the scene well and I can perfectly understand how and why Tristan fell apart.

Hoping Mikael can put him back together.

Intriguing charaters and good story!
person DrkDreamer
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After Chapter 3...

Not sure I can think of this as \'killing you softly\'.

Geez - what a mess drugs make of things. Can they really make it out?

Wishing them luck - and awaiting the next chapter.
person Eve
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I finished reading chapters 1 and 2 I could have sworn it resembled some other story (the writting style I mean) and then I clicked on your name and it dawned on me that you also The Last Laugh. Sorry, I don\'t pay much attention to the author\'s names. Anyway on with the review, I thought it was an excellent beginning to a story. I\'ve read several stories similar to this plot, but none have come as close emotionally speaking as this one has. You\'re a talente author and I look forward to reading more of this story and the other one.
person anonymous
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, no wonder I was a little confused. Aw well, great stroy so far. <3
person DraculUnknown
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn drugs! Tristen needs to dump Brian.I dont think he loves him like mikeal does.....no fair....Awesome, tho! i love it!