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for Crazy Jane

by LadyFlame

schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I know what you mean, I don't like putting up my poetry. I havn't put up any yet but who knows? This poem is really great. I know that I have a madness inside of me, but I've learned to accept it and move on. To look at the bright side of the glittering mirror and not try to stare at myself too much. I find that if I look myself in the eyes in the mirror, I start to lose myself to the darkness. But enough of that. Time is precious no matter how little of it we have. Like lone coins jingling in a poor boy's pocket, we have but a few moments to live before we forget others. Forever forgetting..... Plus I want to watch music videos. ^^ Keep up the great work!!!
person tenshiamanda
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That poem was really well written and touching. Reading that really makes me glad i also didn't give up but carried on, because it is worth it.