rate_review Reviews

Terrific beginning!!! Dont give up on the story!

Well heres your good review. It seems to have a good potential. Just make it a longer story, not one of these 3 chapter stories. As long as it gets to have some length, plot twists, heartbreak or so somewhere in here itll be great, remember though its your story. Though I do wish it was longer. Well no I get more chapters because I reviewed right?