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for Brotherly Love

by Evey

schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish it had been a little longer. Can\'t wait to read more.
person Kat
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo...that\'s it!!??!! So sorry that you\'re in pain right now, but that was such a short chapter!! I would really love to read more, \'cause I think you\'ve got the beginnings of a really hot story here. You had a few typos, which you can fix or not depending on your preference, but all in all I can\'t wait for the next chapter!! Hope you feel better and that you update soon!!