rate_review Reviews

oh! brice is so much better than the other guy! at least he pays attention! thanks for bringing him in the pic so fast! and thanks for emailing me the update =D yay! =)

aww hehe, soo, oh so cute, but i dno the jokes felt a little offensive 2 me earlier, bout the kids at the camp, but yeah, i\'m being picky \'cuz i could mention other stuff, but yeah intrsting \'cuz i\'m thinking these 2\'ll stay in contact, and if they do, how i\' mintrsted to find out, and yay for the kiss and melanie pushing brice in, and payback\'s a bitch =p, adn the quote that brice said to melanie, the whole i think ur beautiful and i don\'t think anyone else\'s said that so i want to be the first =DDD! keep it up! =)

I\'m glad you started this up again. It\'s an interesting idea - seeing how someone reacts once they change something so openly noticable about themselves, and also seeing how the outside world reacts to them. I look forward to reading more.

oh man i love =D please update and when u do, email me? idunk24@yahoo.com...thank U!! =)

I really liked it so far, whats happens next? Please update!

it\'s been a long time since an update! glad that you came back. ready for more. :)

I really like this so far. The main character is vivid, with a dark sense of humor. I\'m interested to see where this goes. Good luck!

Great first chapter! I\'m so loving your main character she has a wicked sense of humor.