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Hey there. This story is turning out pretty damn good so far. You really seem to be coming into your own with the whole writing process, so good job! I can't wait to read more.

oh snap i knew it i love it lol cnat wait to read more from u ttyl

Awesome about Clarissa possibly singing for the band. And please, make Melanie let herself finally see Brice next chapter or make him make an appearance. I miss Brice. :( Excellent update though. Keep it coming.

ooh hey, so u kno wat would be good, lucas and clarissa and melanie and brice! haha fast update, thanks =)

Maybe Clarissa could sing for the band? Doesn\'t she have the most amazing voice? That\'d be interesting for her character. And please tell me that the guy Melanie saw was none other than Brice. Oh, how I miss Brice.

Hey, I like it. Very cool. Now ... will she ever see Brice again? *_*
I hope so, I liked that guy better then her first crush :)
Oh yeah, Please continue!

Okay. So I just read the entire story and I must say, I really loved it. It was so great and I\'m glad Melanie didn\'t let herself be someone she\'s not around Lucas. As for him, no. Don\'t like him. Now that she\'s skinny, he\'s like \'Hey Beautiful. Need a ride?\' I hate people like that therefore, I\'m not a Lucas fan as of right now. But please update! I can\'t wait to read more!

omigoosh! that was like the best chapter ever! haha! thanks for updating! =) ur sucha good updater!! yeah so i love how things went wiht lucas, i thought they would go sour, and i love the apple aroma, tho i wish melanie would tell him the truth how he really knos her but i like how they\'re getting more comfy with each other, and iono, is melanie being herself rite now, i kno she wasn\'t, but then now is she, and omigoosh, i love how lucas is being shy, and i love how melanie was good to confront him and admit she has a crush on him!!! =D does this story have any basis in real life or how did u think of this?!, and yay 4 calling clarissa =D and yay for things being good at home and i luv how the chapter went and i\'m glad it wasn\'t a dream =) <33333333 great job =DDDDDDDDD !

awww that\'s so super great =D perfect title, yay for melanie! 31! =D, and man, parents, soo cool, iono tho the fact that it wasn\'t the same when she was larger a bt kinda sux, but yeah, thatnks again for notifying me bout the update =) u r great =D i kno u prob didn\'t mean to offend with jokes, thank U!!! =D

love the title of this chappie as well =) omigoosh, having that effect on lucas hope =pppp WoW...but yeah, does he remember who she is?!, kinda sux those wasn\'t the same when she was larger again, uhm, yeah oh yeah yay for brice leaving a note, i kno they will meet again, rite?! g r r r e a t! =D =)