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lol, I love Melanie's reaction to seeing Brice. Great chapter!

Oooo I like it. I am looking forward to your update :)

I knew that she was really seeing him :-P. hee hee. I like this story... you're doing a good job... now I can't for the next one to see what Lucas' reaction is. Maybe he'll start to notice Clarissa instead?

hey i love it alot im so happy brice is in oh ushould totally have a battle between lucas annd him and ya lol but duh brice would win at least i hope he does---ttyl

omigoosh u r so rite! =D haha, the only complaint i hv was when they got too close when they were in the house, b/c i thought well beforehand they didn't kno each other too long and that was intense, but i get the reasoning behind it, and it's just me, but other thatn that, the whole chapter, PERFECT! and i thought the story was over and glad it's not, 'cuz i saw complete but i get now y u put it, that's so cool, the perfect scene in the beginning with melanie's parents on either side of brice, and omigoosh! he lives in the same town?! hahaha that's so freakin awesome!! =D and lessee, wta else, i like brice's personality, kinda cocky or confident rather, with smirk, yeah? and yay for melanie realizing they'er perfect together and wow, the last line of this chappie, kinda sad, but realistic, and iono, i was wanting good things 2 happen 2 lucas, i forget is he good or bad, that depends, so yeah and the stuff bout xtra appendages, never lettin u go, love hanign u around, and others, grrreat! =D haha, yes i do love this chappie! =) stupendous spectacular job ;)

=D hey am i anon?! nope, not 2 predictable =) luv the whole clarissa thing, 'cept on the divorce of course, but great way of bringing things full circle, aww, chocolate cip cookie and milk and brice <3

=D hey am i anon?! nope, not 2 predictable =) luv the whole clarissa thing, 'cept on the divorce of course, but great way of bringing things full circle, aww, chocolate cip cookie and milk and brice <3

YES!!!! I love you and that was an excellent chapter. I cannot wait to read more. Melanie and Brice. Lucas and Clarissa. But hey. Don't do this for me. Write whatever you want because you know I'll keep reading. But thanks for the chapter. That was great. Can't wait for more.

ok this is a great story. but the hanging is so cruel please update ASAP its great!!! keep going i wanna see the two boys fight for her love... awsome story keep going

totally just reviewed but i had to say i agaree with templeton21 and Melanie and Brice. Lucas and Clarissa. theory. that would be interesting.