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for Life Of Melanie (Completed)

by hbtHeather

person doloris
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love these types of stories, but I\'m beggin\' and pleadin\' you to update soon.
person =)
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!! why have you stopped? I hope that it is only because of a writes block that has suddenly disappeared!! Right?
person Leena
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was good!
you had me feeling giddy when they first kissed. you had me laughing when they made the jokes about life. and you had me worrying when the fight broke out.
i was happy when Mel picked Brice.
it was just GREAT! i'll check up for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a leetle short, but i like how the whole fite thing played out, yay lucas clarissa 'cuz clarissa will eventually get with him rite, and see lucas doing exactly wat melanie doing, going with feelings, yay for melanice and brice! =D thanks =)
person Liz
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo its so good. Please update soon :)
person templeton21
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. I just read Chaps. 14-15 and I have to tell you, I love this story. I really do and I can't wait until you update it again. I am happy about Lucas and Clarissa. I saw that happening and I'm glad that Clarissa's reaction was realistic. Keep it coming. I can't wait.
person Southern
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Drama! :D
Are they going to duke it out?!
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh crap, iono i don't really like how he's acting, but i guess he's got some justification yeah? yay she's choosing brice, rite, how bout lucas and clarissa?!
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i wannna know whats gunna happen i felt bad as to happened to lucas but maybe u could make lucas and clarissa hook up or somethin i dunno but ttyl
person Liz
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! cant wait for the next chappy :O