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for Sometimes, I might cry...

by Icicle

person Danielle
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow you should really continue this,its great so far!..i hope you end it on a happy note, im not big on the ending being all depressing and stuff, plzz!???..hhah..much love to yer writings, keep doing what you do best!
person ryvik
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi!

oh my god, i am living the same goddamn thing as you are right now.. and i am moving in with her because she's my best friend and i want to get as close to her as possible.. but she have a bf.. anyway.. i wish you the best of the lucks !!
you can email me, if you want to talk, i'm there often !

angi
person fireinu
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. I hope you finish it.
person Charlotte Marigold Ives
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man...I can\'t even believe to tell you how awesome of a writer you are. I\'m really, really glad you wrote this; It reminds me a lot, maybe a little too much, of my own life. I\'ve written a similar piece before (which isn\' on AFF), depicting the events before I got my girlfriend, and the events are...well, really similar. It\'s surprising, but interesting in a way, I guess. Anyhow, it\'s a fiction piece beyond awesome and beyond my expectations as to what it would be like, and I absolutely loved it. I cannot wait for the next installment, and very much look forward to it! Hope I can talk with you sometime!

~Lotte
person Faith
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey girl this story is great pls update and tell what happen this is the best love story ever ...
person Cory
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crap, I\'m a sucker for a good love story, and this one isn\'t just good, it\'s amazing!!! I can\'t wait to read the rest of it! (btw, good luck! ^_~)