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for Hikaru

by Hikaru137

person RooYooWolf
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey sexy! Update it is so good...*drools*
person Asasina
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, great story. Hikaru is cute, really cute. You could use more details in your chapters. But, I think, other than that it\'s good.
Keep up the good work. Please update soon. I can\'t wait to see what happens next in the growing relationship between Hikaru and Hazzard. *smile*
person susuc
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want Hazzard. He is so cool. Hikaru is so cute. I love them both. ^_^v More plz.
person Dark Angel
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok .. not very good at reviewing.. but i figure.. since i like this story so far i would.. ok i liedd.. I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!.. lol .. .. the only thing i can say is that i was upset.. not getting better details about the goings-on in the apartment before they went to sleep.. i mean getting to know why hazzard laughed so much .. a must know lol .. but anyway .. Awsome job! cant wait for more
person Ria
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really think this story is addicting so far.lol.Hikaru seems like a really cool person you wanna meet(I wanna meet this Hikaru! lol)Hazzard seems hot. XD anyway what i liked was how it was described when Hikaru woke up in the middle of the night and Hazzard and him started talking,then went to bed together (heyy...theres a lil somethn\' somethn\' goin\' on there...XD lol) awww but both Hazzard and Hikaru felt like seeing eachother again...oh I\'m sure they will...i got this feeling...BIG feeling..hehe.
person Kyle...XD You better know me.
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! *thinks* I like it, you could fix xome spelling but I am sure you have. X3 But I like it soooo much I want to see chap. 2!!! O.O * clings to you* I want to seeeee it so bad you gave me a fucking cliff hanger..XP So evil.XD I love you Jess, Well *thinks* I am bord and I want to snuggle you..XD * laughs* Sounds like smuggle you..XD *laughs and picks you up and steal you* >> << Noone will ever know....*evil grin* XD Anyhooo! But I love it and I want more...>> << You are doing a great job!
person Kyle-baby..^.~
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more! XD And this is yaoi right..>> << *licks your lips and kisses you* They would be good lovers.>XD I want to see them fall in love! XD *holds you close and pulls you under covers* Lets cuddle...X3 * grins and eat pizza* YumYumYum....*laughs and holds you close* I loved this one..it was so cute. X3