rate_review Reviews

Its going great...keep up the good work....now that you have a story line, let\'s lose some clothing :)

Interesting premise... she\'s obviously depressed and masking it... not very successfully. Good luck with the story; it\'s well written, no offence but I won\'t continue with it... suicide is a painful subject at the moment.

I\'m loving this story so far. I can\'t wait to see where it goes from here.
Please post chapter 3 soon.
Thanks, Kathy

I wuv it so far...lookin forward to the next chappies...keep up the good work ^_^

Very interesting. You\'ve started the fic very well. You need to give a little background on some of the characters. Don\'t rush it, though. You\'ve got a pretty good flow goin\' right now. I look forward to seeing what you\'ll do with this fic. Nice job so far!

I am reading it. I thought that this was a pretty good opening chapter. It has some really good potential. There are a lot of things that you can work with. I was intrigued. It is very hard to intrigue me sometimes but this story I thought was not going to be a good one in all honest opinion. But then I read it and I thought it was pretty good. I do think that you will become a better writer. Keep on the good work and please continue the series. More people willl learn to read it and learn to become attached to this series like they are to others. Just be patient and do not rush things. I would rather have a excellent but slow to come chapter then a rushed fast come chapter. Good luck!