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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it is truely great. i can wait to read the sequel.
MentalCloud
MentalCloud
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweetpea! Is that it? No... nuh uh.... you gotta have a sequal or something.... I really liked this story. It kinda took me back *sighs wistfully* Yeah well, uhm.... Maybe you could use this story as a prequel or something. There\'s so many things you could do with this! Great stuff! I haven\'t been doing a lot of reading lately and I always come to check out your stuff.... I kinda get sick of the whole Inuyasha type theme hey... keep up the good work and please do something more with this story....
cheers bad girl! ^_^
cheers bad girl! ^_^
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I\'m so tempted to hate you for leaving me hanging with this story. Since you won\'t continue without a review,you blood thirsty person ;) , here is my review. I love this story and its characters and you just have to continue or I\'m going to sit here and whine until you do. Yes, that was a little bit dramatic, but people don\'t call me a drama queen for nothing. Keep up the good work!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that ending was REALLY abrubt :( hmmm i DO like this story but it did seem rushed near the end and the ending seemed incomplete; a sequel would be needed in order to finish it off. I\'m not upset that you chose to a sad ending since i like the fact that you wanted to end it with a less predictable closing, just saying it was really abrubt.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhh...that was a little...unexpected. It\'s ok though ^_^ The story will go how the story will go. I just hope that was the plan the whole time...? Anyways, I do look forward to the next story. I think, in the last two chapters, this became really good. A lot more insight into Regina (although I would love to have learned more about Devin. Maybe in the sequel?)
Keep writing! ^_^ I will look for you and harrass you more when you post the sequel! ^_^
Keep writing! ^_^ I will look for you and harrass you more when you post the sequel! ^_^
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OWWW! That was a SAD chapter! Poor Devin! First his freakin\' father doesn\'t even care about him and tells him what a failure he is! And THEN he confessess his love to Regina, who not only does not believe him, but Insults him as well! Hope things go better btw those two! I\'m dying to see them together!!! Anyway! good story! A little bit rush this past chapters, but who cares!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Better, better! I think this chapter really gives us a little more insight into Regina...and wow, what an ending! I was afraid that I made you angry with my last review, so it\'s a relief to me that you updated! ^_^ Good chapter, keep doing it!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg so devin finally said how he felt, while regina doesn\'t like him because he\'s weak? Regina was a bitch, but maybe just maybe she\'s in denial...yikes...please continue soon, i want to know how both characters deal with whats been presented to them.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The father/coach is such an ungrateful ass! I hope Regina reallizes and acts on her feelings soon, but I\'m Loving the story! Update please!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!! WTF is that man\'s problem?!?! Jesus, I so would have gotten off that stretcher and beat the shit outta that man...damn. That\'s all I can say...damn!