rate_review Reviews

So far I love the whole of ESH, probly one of the best reads I\'ve had in a while. Thanks for makeing me a char. Can\'t wait for the next chapters, and if you need help I\'m here.

At the moment....I just want to stop and point out some of my favorite parts....and/or lines....with a few giggles and shit around...put here and there.

Flame reached over the table and pinched Wind’s cheeks. “I wuv you my wittle-itty-bitty-Windy-pooh...”

“Aye-aye mo’- Cap-i-tan!” Earth said, standing up and saluting.

“...” Flame shook her head, “Sometimes I swear I’m not the leader of this group, I’m the fucking mother...”

“You know what may really calm her?” Wind gave Storm a look, Storm gulped. “Playing with Shadow’s hair.”

“HAIR!” Flame attached herself to Shadow’s hair and stroked it and rubbed her face in it playfully.

“See?” Wind said.

“For once Windy-pooh, you’re right.” Storm smiled.

“DON’T CALL ME WINDY POOH!” Wind screamed, and the light fixture above swung back and forth from the wind he created.



“She’s going to pick me.” Storm said.

“Hell no.” Wind said, “She’s taking me.”

Earth slammed his head onto the table, “Here they go again.”

“She is taking ME!”

“No, Smoke-breath, she’s taking ME!”

“Oh low blow... Not on your life you overrated rain cloud!” Wind growled.

“She’s taking me, you old puff of air!”

Wind’s eye visibly twitched. “You...son of a...”

“I’ve decided...” Flame said.
Everyone got quiet and looked at Flame.

“I’m taking... Ice and Shadow.”

Both Storm and Wind fell off their chairs. Storm was the first one to his feet.

“This...THIS IS YOUR FAULT!” Storm hissed.

“My fault??? You started it!”

“Bullshit!”

Earth ducked down at the right moment, as Wind catapulted himself over towards Storm, and wrapped his hands around Storm’s neck.

Flood sighed, “Boys...boys... play nice now.”

*falls over laughing hysterically while Wind and Storm shake their heads*

“FLOOD! Code COUCH!” Earth said.

“Something tells me that we are going to go through a lot of couches.” Ice said to Leaf.

*Blush*

“What is he doing?” Bud asked.

“Apparently, he is using his powers to travel in shadows to bring Flame to orgasm, which is remarkable, granted that both Storm and Wind can’t get her to make that many noises without the use of other body parts...not that Flame seems to be minding it...she’s rather enjoying it.” Earth said.

Everyone stops and stares at Earth.

“Earth had a smart moment.” Ice said.

“PANCAKES AND BALLOONS!” Earth cried.

*eyebrow twitches....before falling down and rolling on floor with hysterical laughter*
That was tooooo good...we really need to talk more at IHOP...

o.k. and as for using my poem...of course you may use it.....it\'d be nice...escpecially considering that Lava and I USED to be close. *sighs and mentally shakes self before smiling brightly* anyway feel free...can\'t wait to read the next chapter......

FLAME

great chapter.....but I would have left Lava out of it....although....this should be interesting......and event he Hurricane will not defeat the mighty STORM!!!!

...Inside the bedroom, half naked, Wind fell over, hearing that, “OH YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!”

Storm also heard that and laughed, “YES! IN YOUR FACE WIND WALKER!”
*FALLS OVER LAUGHING HYSTERICALLY* oh that was good!!!!

...He just got some.” Flame came walking into the kitchen, and like a trained little puppy, Storm handed over his coffee cup and went to get his own.
*sighs* too true


woulda put more...but I gotta go to bed. night Ice!

*GROWLS* LAVA MUST DIE...BY MY HANDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*giggles* how\'d you know?
“You like Wind-ie poo?”

“Don’t call me Windy pooh.” Wind scowled.

“What? Mom always told me to share.” Flame smiled.

...she did???

CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!


BEYOND EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MORE DAMN YOU
MMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

*snickers* somehow I gather Flame doesn\'t like Lava....what do you think?

Inside the bedroom, half naked, Wind fell over, hearing that, “OH YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!”

Storm also heard that and laughed, “YES! IN YOUR FACE WIND WALKER!”
*pouts* that was a low...blow....*snicker*


DAMNED CLIFFIES....great chapter though.....now...if you don\'t want burnt.....I\'d get typing...Flame is NOT in a pleasant mood....now...maybe more will make her happier...*shudders* I knew she\'d be more susceptible to bad moods after that one..but this is rediculous....

*IRK*

that.....he just had to do that....*sighs*

I am calm.....*eyebrow twitches* son of a bitch......anything to piss me off....

anyway.....great story...even if you did put Storm in it....and you posted two chapters in one night......impressive.......alright....I have reviewed...now I must go sulk....I mean...um go for a walk.....


*pouts* DAMNED STORM!!!!!

That was too good, truly...you have out done yourself......*snickers* no doubt you have spent quite a lot of time around Flame.....no really I COULDN\'T tell at all....

*rolls eyes*

now if you don\'t want one HELL of a storm...I suggest more...and soon.

teehee
I am the goddess of Flame, \'come\' with my my precious Wind and Darling Storm.....


teeheee....*SQUEALS*

STORM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*pounces onto his lap and nuzzles neck*

....I missed you too Flame...but this is the reviewing section....no playing........*watches her pout*

DAMN, alright, alright, *kisses her gently back*

I admit I missed you too...o.k......

Now review the Story....

for Ice.

O.k.



“I am Flame, conjurer of the fiery hell that shall end the reign of terror! Flame out your evil deeds!”

*giggles* I love it love it looooooove IT!!!!


MORE PLEASE?

PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE?

WITH sugar and a fresh, plump cherry on top??? (or not)

and please keep the sugar away from Earth, we\'ll have to peel him off the ceiling as is...*giggles insanely*

NOW MORE!!!! *brandishes whip*

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!