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by Sephirena

person Storm
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how could anyone forget the lovely Flame\'s birthday????

*mentally hugs Flame* it\'ll be alright....everyone that matters remembered didn\'t they.

I love this story...you know that Ice...if you do not continue...I will be forced to harm your masochistic ass...and not in any way shape or form that you would enjoy...now...type....this story makes Flame happy therefore it must either continue...or she must get rights to continue it....now....work on it.

Storm...

*looking smugly at Wind*

And another Happy birithday Daling Flame.
person Flame
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily* yay.....*yawns* sorry......it been a loooooooooooooong day......

so you\'ll have to forgive me if my review isn\'t what it normally would be.....I can hardly see straight...*sniffles* Storm remembered my b-day....but Wind hasn\'t said a damned thing yet.....*bursts into tears* prick

*sniffles* I love this story...*blow nose* please type more soon.

Flame.....*wipes at eyes*
person ...
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one line out of this entire story both haunts me and makes me all hot and bothered....

“I know.” Flame giggled. “I didn’t want the panty line to ruin the illusion of the outfit.”

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Just what every guy wishes to hear from a woman that they REALLY like....

Excuse me while I go...um....take a very cold shower...

keep typing girl....
person Storm
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue.....um......please.....I might let you get in a free hug....*twitch* Might.

I like this story, there may not be that much descriptiveness...on certain spots...(I still got more than Wind) :-P
person sEVERALY PISSED OFF FLAME
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*IRK*

THAT\'S IT YOUR WANT TO STOP TYPING ESH!!!!!?????

I AM NOW SEVERALY IRKED....NOW I HAVE TO CONTACT A FEW ELEMENTALS I KNOW....IF YOU\'RE REALLY THAT SICK OF IT, I\'LL TAKE IT, AND POST IT MYSELF LIKE DANIELLE VALENTINE...BUT I WISH YOU TO KNOW...I AM SEVERLY DISAPOINTED, JUST AS YOU GET A DECENT FIC GOING THAT HAS A GOOD PLOT AND STORY LINE....YOU DECIDE YOU DON\'T WANT TO CONTINUE IT....KNOW THIS...ICE......I WILL EITHER TAKE WHAT YOU HAVE AND POST IT WITH YOUR BLESSING....OR I WILL RESTART IT AS AN ORIGINAL FROM THE VERY BEGINNING, BEFORE ICE FIRST MET ANYONE.....*GROWLS SOFTLY* I BELIEVE WE NEED TO HAVE A HEART TO HEART...BUT I\'D BETTER GO NOW....I\'M CURRENTLY IN A \'MISTRESS OF BLOOD AND DARKNESS\' MOOD....

TILL LATER.....ICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCE


A SEVERELY PISSED OFF FLAME
person Shadow
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA........sorry. Nice Halloween episode. Got a few ideas for a death scene, just msg me about it. On a different note, Happy Birthday Flame!
person Flame
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*purrrs* gotta love the Phantom of the Opera....that\'s one sure Fire way to get me going....*grins suggestively* Love it.....absolutely love it....and I can really see a mayor doing that....like on the ppg.....\"Girls can you open my jar of pickles\"

*shudders* can\'t believe I quoted something from the Powerpuff girls....eew

Anyway better than some of the lemons anyway, I\'m sure Storm\'ll love it....and Wind\'ll growl as loudly as possible when he reads it.

And while I DO like Bud...I think he may be the one you could kill off....after all him and Leaf more or less do the same thing....AND if he dies...Leaf could preform a ritual to absorb Bud so that he isn\'t really gone...but you don\'t have to worry about typing about him anymore...sound good? I could look for a similar ritual or you could make one up, your choice.

O.k. loved the new chapter...can\'t wait to read more.....

*grins evilly*

who is next on my list???

tchao,

Flame
person Storm
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Growl......*

............that......sucks.....fucking Wind.................

The fight was something Flame would do....I am still curious if she\'s let you know the full extent of her Hell\'s Fury though....

It\'s interesting to say the least....just never get on her bad side...least of all while her eyes are that Ice blue....*shudders*

now get to work on the next chapter....or you may find yourself with heavy storms in your area!!!!


Storm

P.S. never ever....hug me.
person Flame
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles hysterically*

I LIKED IT!!!!!

AND YOU REMEMBERED HELL\'S FURY.....YAY!!!!

anyway......teehee....more please.................

Flame
person Storm
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I resent that...Wind and I do not fight like children....wait.....I guess sometimes we might..............

ANYway..........great chapter....now get to work on the next one............

*snicker*

Oh well...I refuse to argue the point on this one.....

(Wind may act childish....BUT I do not.....*sticks out tongue*)

Storm