rate_review Reviews

Love Flame, love the story, love the arguing.....Shadow seems like he\'ll be the one to get the girl, while I know most girls love guys fighting over them it just seems that they \'click\' better. As for Ice she comes off like she\'s trying to be too powerful to compensate for something.....but she seems like her and Tempest should be a cute couple....but you know I could say better.....IF YOU\'D UPDATE....HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO TYPE A CHAPTER AND POST IT?!?!?! IT\'S BEEN OVER A MONTH!!!

Sorry.....but I had to get that outta my system.........it is just really bugging me that it\'s taking so long on my favorite stories for the authors to update, but I admit that I owe finding said stories to Elizabeth Spiegel......you and Baka Neko are mentioned in her profile.....

and it\'s taking her forever to update to....WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?!???

are you two trying to kill your fans?!?

please update soon....

Sephy-sama

I like this story, Earth is funny-and-interesting-and-and never mind.....I read it while on a sugar buzz..now excuse me...I\'m gonna go play in traffic!!!!
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Temptest????

Shouldn\'t that be Tempest?

Why oh why did you have us cut Shadow\'s hair???

Am I not low enough on Flame\'s shit list....?

I enjoyed the newest chapters, and I do appologize....for not reviewing sooner, and I am glad that you have me attempting to redeem myself...but by cutting Shadow\'s hair....I undid whatever good giving her the kitsune pup did me.

*sighs* and Storm got off waaaaaaaay too easily.

Anyway....I give you my review and apology.

I patiently await more chapters.

Wind

Great chapter.....What\'s next? The Elementals are back...now can Ice really channel spirits or did you just add that? I\'m curious now. Oh well I may find out someday, till then......keep typing....Shit I\'m late again...

Storm

...what did I name the female kitsune that Shadow gave me???

I liked it....time to brew some potions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*imitates baby\'s laugh*

anyway, very nice......it seemed shorter than I know it was....but I think that\'s just because I really got into it and there was a story line with some original stuff thrown in....

O.k. I have reviewed.....and just because I\'m not as mad at wind in the story....DOES NOT MEAN HE\'S FORGIVEN AT ALL!!!!!!


LOVE the story,
Flame

Hmmm worth the wait......YES! Thought it was great. I\'ll help you on the whole judgement thing later, plus his other attacks. Keep up the good work, remember we\'re willing to help with Ideas if yah need em.
Shadow

While in gerneral I really like this story, here is a touch of critism, you shouldn\'t use rituals straight from the Internet or whereever you have been getting them....and just changing a few things so that the elementals are the ones doing it, be original, use your imagination, and please...we don\'t need full details of rituals...some more actual story line and fight scenes would be better, hell even a decent Lemon wouldn\'t go astray.

I hope you do not take this too harshly, but I feel it needs brought to your attention, I have phrased this as friendly as I could, it is only a Flame (pardon the pun to whomever Flame is) if you choose to see it as one.

anon

not bad, but why is it.....Wind and I haven\'t been with Flame in the last...two...maybe three chapters? Seriously...I\'m going to have to Tsunami you shortly.....

But anyway...Earth and Ice huh? Who\'d have thunk...to bad Earth is female and straighter than an arrow.....but I guess you get the male in the story, well I have got to go, sorry I haven\'t reviewed in a while, I\'ve been reading....but having to leave soon afterwards, but I made it a special point today to get this damned review up if it killed me...and if I don\'t leave soon...it just might.

Storm

While I am glad that you are actually updating in a timely fashion...THAT WAS TOO SHORT....but I guess the two chapters make up for the lack of too much content....now...I the goddess of Flame and Desire demand you either get to work...or go to bed so you can work on more later....

CHI


FLAME

bout damned time...now I have to get ready to leave..will do better review later....lots of love to you Ice.

Flame