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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh poor daniel is confused! It\'ll be interesting to see what happens when they meet up and whos the guy with alex? ;) keep writing!!!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really co ming along good. Its drawn be in and keeeps my interest.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the concept and glad you developed a relationships between the 2 before any thing happened. oh and in the second chapter there\'s some werid box things, i think they were meant to be quoatation marks. I just thought i\'d let you know (or maybe its my dumb ass computer?) Anyway great story, update!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lisn and Sara, thanks for reviewing. I thought this is a funny and cute story to write. Those weird box things you\'ll have to blame adultfanfiction.net for their technical problems. The boxes are supposed to be quotation marks, so if that is confusing to any of you...
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..hmm I\'m not quite sure where this is going, but for some reason I like it so far...so in that sense it is very good writting to get me interested in first couple paragraphs O_o I\'m curious though about what the guys look like...I guess I\'ll just have to wait for the next update..
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it!! It has suspence and the hitchhiker seems really crazy to me! REally GREAT STORY!!!