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Wow, this was really intense. This is my favorite sort of reading, delving into peoples minds to see how they tick and why they do what they do. It was hard for me to understand why she did what she did. I would have like to have more of an explanation, but perhaps the lack of explanation is what makes the story so intense. Leaves you to draw your own conclusions.

Anyway, great job. Please keep writing!!

Good stuff, very intense!

Well hello gorgeous! I thought I\'d come over and help ya with this since it seems the formating decided to do ya up the butt. You have to double space everything otherwise it comes out in big paragraphs like that. Yes, I know, irritating but it will get more hits and reviews if you seperate them and make them easier to read. Otherwise, I agree with your other reviewer, this is morbid!

Gah! But very well written and emotional. As I\'ve said before, if you write something personal, I swear it always comes out better than anything you just randomly make up. So awesome... I\'ll make sure to send some people over to read this. You go girl.. oh, and give me a call!

Tara

Wow.

Camaro was right this is really good. but plz space out the paragraphs its hard to read and keep my place.

Sue

heartbreaking. very well writen

Wow, I am reading this story and thinking it is a cry for help from the author OR writing is a hidden talent that she is discovering she has and enjoys! I am hoping the latter is true because the author is a brilliant young lady who has a bright future ahead of her if that is her choice. Choices can be difficult sometimes and hard to live with BUT everyone has the choice to succeed and the choice to fail. I know that a lot of people write about suicide and making it sound so different than the actuality of it. If someone commits suicide is it murder? Loved ones who are left to pick up the pieces of such an action do not get over it in just days or weeks. An action of this nature haunts people for the rest of their lives. They wonder if it was their fault and what else they could of done to save such a person. They could have been better parents or friends or siblings. They have memories of happy times and trinkets of their loved one surrounding their home. They feel they did not give enough even enough was given. People get into dark holes and can always climb out IF they want to because if they want to and they have love and support, there is ALWAYS an answer and help. But as I read this FICTIONAL story I think the author is very talented in expressing and gives the reader a very vivid picture of a sad and troubled Ren. That is what makes a true author a success is when they can achieve that with their reader. Sad story, but very well written. Just some ideas above to think about in the future writing of your story. Don\'t read anything into the above, just a critique of my opinion.

Wonderful!! Morbid...passionate....painful.......I LOVED IT!! Can\'t wait for the rest of it!!!!