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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great so far, like where it is heading! Please continue. Your writing keeps improving!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! Please update soon!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is really great. l love the Marcus Michelle realtionship. I just hope she doent get mad when she finds out about Janette and Marcus one night stand. Because i know she will find out, they always find out. Anyway keep writing your stories are very good and interesting
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, there, dude(ette?) calm down-- everything\'s GREAT so far. i love \'em dearly, and throwing in a fifteen year old BOY? oh, the comedic possibilities (or akward moments, take your pick...)
thank you!
thank you!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, just wanna say that this story kicks ass. i like it best of the others so far, \'cause your writing, technically, just seems a lot better. your characters are good too-- marcus is a loveable reformed rebel, and i can sympathize with michelle, although at times i want to kick her butt into gear. and i love the sean-tony couple, esp. the idea of them drunk and making out against a fridge.
thank you!
thank you!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is an awesome ficcie! Marcus has got to be one of my favorite OCs out there; I love the realistic aspects of his personality, and that he doesn\'t have to be a complete \'bastard-with-a-past\' (not that I don\'t enjoy those, too ^_^) to make the fic so wonderfully intruiging. Loving this, looking forward to an update!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Janette is a ho. Im so mad at marcus for having sex with her! why did he have to fuck her, she seems so skanky. she better not come back to cause trouble for marcus and michelle when they are a couple, which im waiting for ! please update!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im going crazy! please post chapter 6!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u gotta update! oh! and no catherine please!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 and 5 is good as usual. I thought Marcus had issues but Michelle is just complicated. I don’t know if this is your intention but I find the stereotype male and female roles in a relationship reverse in this story. Nice ending to chapter 5 and thanks for updating.